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Loved This! And the happy ending brought tears to my eyes

Our guys sure are Smart! Love how they play mind games with the bad guys

Great visual of the interior of the house! I did a hawaii five 0 tour 2 years ago when on vacation in Hawaii and was in "Steve's " house. This brought back some cool memories

Oh man, loving the Suspense! Mahina better trust Steve after this!

Well this was one big disappointment the write up made it soumd so good but steve wasn't even that badly hurt this sucked

Linda história, parabéns. Obgda por dividir seu talento. Bj

I have really enjoyed this story. It's been great. Love how you write Steve. Looking for your next 5.0 fiction.

A wonderful story, and, you are a very talented writer. I can virtually visualize each character speaking in their own voices as I read their words. I can even picture poor Danny moving his arms all around as he speaks. I wish the TV writers would tone him down a little, the poor guy doesn't buy a lot of sympathy. Anyway, I'm babbling now. Just wanted to say Great job, I've read all your 5-0 stories and will start on Moonlight, I loved that series.

And another toy is fixed by Steve McGarrett. Perfect ending. And now I have a picture of CPS's Sam too. ;-)
Thank you for this great story. It was a pleasure to read. Have you ever thought of writing a story solely with Steve and Lou? I love them together in the show and in your story. Steve and Lou are both not that easy to write. At least I think so because they are multi layered characters and you have both of their 'voices' top notch!

Oh Steve is one smart man. I am impressed by your idea of convicting Makenna. And now I think I can tell what Steve is up to. I think it has to do with Mahina. Steve lives up to his promises. Always. Really really great story.

I love it when Steve gets all scary and menacing in the blue room. Conrad does not have a chance. And after that Steve will help Mahina, I am sure of that. That's the way he is. I am so looking forward to reading how Steve is fixing this broken toy.

Uh-oh! Can't type. Must read.

Oh I love Lou! Danny is a member of an elite task force and sometimes I really don't know why. Steve is too nice, I would have sent him to the HPD officers. Gah.
And now the plot thickens... dunn dunn dunn... I just wish I had time to read this all at once. Damn you RL. This is so exciting.

May I punch Danny? Pretty please? Lol. I am by no means as indulgent as Steve ist with this guy. Maybe he should interview Todd back at HQ. It is safe there. But then... no... Steve is way scarier.
I can't wait to see when Conrad realizes that their plan has blown up in his face instead of McGarrett and his team. Oh and btw I understand Mia, sometimes you are just a girl, and you notice... things. :-D