This is amazing! I don't even have words to describe how I loved your portrayal of them all...beautiful :)

Oh my God. Sure, tear my heart into pieces, why not.

Break my heart, why don't you.

This is a good story but why did greninja have to leave that was his best pokemon

You have no idea how long I have been looking for something exactly like this! It was better than I ever thought it could be. Thank you it was amazing and just... Thank you

Hi.

Awesome story!

*sniff* The things we do for ourselves and Pokémon...

I liked it, I thought it was an interesting path that the story could go. Good job!

Also Without Greninja, Ash might not win in the Kalos League and he will never be able beat Alain, Diantha and even the eighth Gym Leader Wulfric.

Without Greninja, Ash lost the battle.

Poor Ash. WHY DID YOU RELEASE GRENINJA? I wish Greninja wouldn't leave Ash and I'm wondering, WHY WOULD ALL PEOPLE THINK GRENINJA WOULD LEAVE ASH?! I'm sorry if I said this but I just love Ash and Greninja to be together until the end because they gained a new form and they could get in the Kalos League and win. And I'm really sorry about this for people who has offended me. I'm really sorry. *started crying*

Wow. Very well written. Great job.

interesting chapter and touching.
but damn you, jealous yellow rat, ash lost because of you.