Reviews for Strike Witches: Battleship
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2018
So Taylor Anderson's into the storm?
yoshika with lucy 9999 chapter 6 . 8/5/2017
when next chapter
PotatoZiriki chapter 5 . 5/10/2017
I didn't really like the part where Lux's father was KIA, but since we barely see him in anime, if at all, well, I think it adds to drama and stuff, ya know?

Meh, It's not that important anyway. He dead, and mourned.

Good job with the story, I look forward to more. Godspeed.
GXY-2013 chapter 5 . 11/12/2016
Well, this is so far the only Strike Witches crossover story that you made I like.

Now here's a story challenge that you maybe intetested in it. It won't be like Strike Witches: The Fall of Reach. I hope you won't screw this up!

- Strike Witches x HALO

This is a crossover story idea challenge for anyone to write. I hope anyone is really interested in this. This is post-Halo 3 AU, and take place during Strike Witches Season 2.

In the Battle of Installation 00, with the Halo activated, John-117 and Thel 'Vadam race towards the frigate Forward Unto Dawn using Johnson's Warthog. With no time to reach the cockpit, John-117 uploads Cortana into the frigate to start taking off before the Arbiter is able to take the controls. The front half of the Dawn, containing the Arbiter, makes it through the portal. However, as Halo shakes itself to pieces during its firing sequence and damages the Ark, the portal deactivates as the other half of the Dawn containing Chief and Cortana enter it. This causes them to rip off from the other half of the ship and be sent to an unknown area of space far enough from the Halo's blast, however, since they didn't come out of the other side of the portal, they never made it back to Earth.

However, it is revealed that not only John-117 and Cortana are still alive, they ended up in another universe. They are somewhere between the distance of the Moon and this new Earth, the wreakage of the Forward Unto Dawn is closing its distance to the new Earth due to planet's gravity. It won't be long for the Dawn to reach atmospheric entry and it will soon crash-landed into an area that is not too far from a certain castle in an island.

Meanwhile, in the castle on an island, which it's a base for the 501st Joint Fighter Wing...

It's been a few days after the 501st has been reformed, and it was a normal sunny day for the witches. No Neuroi attacks as of now. Today, once again, Mio Sakamoto is training the four witches. They are Yoshika Miyafuji, Lynette Bishop, Perrine Clostermann and Francesca Lucchini (Mio manage to find and caught Lucchini napping, forcing her to join the others for training). The four girls are closed to exhaustion. That is when the five witches heard a strange sound coming from the sky, and it is getting louder. As they all look up, they were surprise to see a huge fireball descending from the sky, flying base their base, and crash landed in a forest a few miles away. Half an hour later, the rest of the 501st proceed to reach the forest to investigate the crash-site. Once they finally reach there, they are shock and awe of what they saw.

Inside the huge crater, is an extremely large structure of unknown origins. It was actually the back-half of the UNSC Forward Unto Dawn, all still intact and in good condition.

But what is inside the vessel that will soon change their lives forever as they meet a certain SPARTAN-II and an AI.
War Historian-Freedom2134 chapter 5 . 4/20/2016
You're giving my history-gasms. I'm freaking loving the story. KEEP IT UP.
ColonelAmiruddin chapter 5 . 4/13/2016
This is to answer the questions Motown Scrapper and buonadonna raised, the missiles being loaded onto the John Paul Jones are Blue Neuroi missiles, the Blue Neuroi are the friendly neuroi that This is borrowing from me, the ColonelAmiruddinArif
Gamerman22 chapter 5 . 4/12/2016
Chapter 7? Don't you mean chapter 5, and I got the negative feelings that Otto is a Anti-Witches supporter. I wonder who is the other two witches, Could one of em be The Witch of Malta?
Corporal Tommy chapter 5 . 4/12/2016
So who are these witches? And great chapter
Motown Scrapper chapter 5 . 4/11/2016
I want to know where the advanced missiles came from in 1945 at most all they should have been able to replace is SOME of the gun ammo and maybe replace the torpedo tubes with one that fired the standard 12 in torpedoes of 1945. The 155mm shells might be the same as what the Gallians and Fusoans used and the 25mm might be able to use the Fuso 25mm The Phalanx 20mm might or might not be interchangeable with one of the older 20mm rounds.
buonadonna chapter 5 . 4/11/2016
Good chapter, my only complaint is that 1940 didn't have the capability or the technology to make some of the munition. They don't have the technology to make any microprocessor for guidance systems. The bullets might be able to make but they would have to retool there factore for some of them, I don't know how much the change between ammunition then and now is.
Archive keeper chapter 4 . 4/6/2016
Looks like Francesca has a big brother. Or a new Father type. Good chapter
Gamerman22 chapter 4 . 4/6/2016
I hope the submarine problem is resolved, also Francesca is getting better, I hope she won't go crazy to attack the sub for her revenge.
Motown Scrapper chapter 4 . 4/5/2016
So it looks like 'beast' has some good counseling skills. I wonder what will happen when they discover the identity of the submarine, that will get dicey especially if it has video recording equipment that shows the Turbine fired first.
Corporal Tommy chapter 4 . 4/5/2016
Well, good on Beast on getting Francesca out of depression
GXY-2013 chapter 4 . 4/5/2016
This is good, keep up.
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