All right that thing with the skin peeled off was sickening. I was gonna ask how they didnt get fucked with in there but i guess in there Vagos would still be vastly outnumbered and BSU while outnumbered still have Mark's protection.

Damn Mark killed chi;ldren on purpose he's officisally more evil than Neto I have something planned as a result of that where the United Liberty Contact will pay Mark a visit he wont hurt him specifically but he will antagonize hiom because with Merryweather bodies on the ground it's pretty hard to clean all that up theres no way merryweather was abl;e to get all those bodies off the street so the internet would be ablaze with conspiracy theories.

Damn is he gonna feel dumb when he realizes Cruz didn't do it. Granted he still considered hin an enemy to deal with eventually but right now this makes Mark George W Bush and instead of goingdirectly after Afghanistan he went after Iraq.

I'm surprised the Vagos could even take out as many Merryweather membbers as they did seeing as US soldiers could manage to kill jihadists and not sustain any casualties so you'd think they could take down gang bangers without taking a loss

Also when you mentioned that Neto will be attacked by all the major BSU members at some point thats all weel and good but if Anas in it that might be too much because with a jumping thats when a bunch of people that cant handle their own do it Ana I would say has a better chance of beating Neto one on one than Mark does but then agai idk because would Mark and Ana fighting who would win in that case? Have they ever pondered that? And as far as Thire being there Jose would be pissed if he didnt get a rematch on that too cause he did spare him.

He wouldn't agree with Thire that he disrespected him by sparing him in fact he';d say it was respect because he knew he'd face him again and wanted a chance to beat him fair and square.

It was nice to see Felix use that Rifle too.

Also as far as the Barett i know im stupid for asking but just how much damage would it do what i hate about some of these guns and the demomstrations i cant find always a youtube link that shows what it wold do to certain body parts. Like video games will show that a desert eagle can blow your head off but i dont think it can take your entire head off. Shotguns, sure but only some shotguns and then sniper rifles or assault rifles tit's like which ione?

By the way I have packie ptretty much facing death row i mean even in a state like NY where the death penalty is gone if you commit capitol murder you can still get it. And if a Westie had actually killed fouer out of five mob bosses from the Commission they would most definitly be looking at death row right?

Granted he did do it in Alderney which I don't think New Jersey banned the death penalty and even ifthey did one of teh things that makes it capitol murder is if it's two or more people and just because somebody is a mob boss that doesn't mean you wouldn't still get death row.

a threesome alibi lol really

Gotta agree with Miguel on that one.

So cruz and miguel killed mark's sister and courtney they are so screwed but as much trouble as they've been they probably won't go down easy without doing a lil more damage but they signed they death certificate

The Peace was never going to last with Miguel out there but now that Mark had lost someone he was going to be with for rest of his life but now New Acadia going a full on War since Merryweather attacks but no one going to able to stop Mark from killing Miguel and if someone stop him they will be taking a long dirt nap for life. I did notice the sleeping dogs reference about the wedding cause i know it was not going to be a happy ending for the group.

I'd like to see Link live I mean you already took out Maurice, Piper, Robbie etc.

Damn nobody left to psycho analyze Neto or Paul with Gwen gone but was she the one shot in the back of the head?

And as for the shootout that was intense but I didn't think there'd be thirty bodies I thought they'd be in and out like New Jack City.

So Mark and Courtney were not officially married when she was killed? I didn't see Maurice going out like that too.

Also did this all happen before or after my last chapter what with what I showed Ana and Mai up to and all since I had my chapter take place in June.

It looks like Cruz is gonna take the hard way out and I don't know how he will even do any damage on the way out. I think we all know who that phone number is though,

I know tha Jill being friends with Mai and knowing who she is now is would explain how she knows who Paul is but the two never met personally and I never addressed that dynamic personally. How much does the BSU know about him for that matter? They know he got shot and went to prison that's easy to know about and the frame for Aila's death but what all else do they know?

Like Marco knows who he is too but do they know yet about what heists he was involed imn like the series A heists, do they know about his history with the AOD's before Aila's death, do they know that much about his time in Bohan, etc?

That whole heist at the bayou was intense! I will say that my jaw dropped at some bits, including the part with the alligator.

I liked the part with Mark and Alison at the beginning. It not only gave some insight about Mark's mental state when he was high from the residue of the drugs, but also showed some signs that the two still care about each other. Not to say that they didn't, but with Alison with Steve, it makes me wonder where the two stand with their feelings.

I actually wonder it Dunbar appears again at all later on, especially now that Mark and the crew are older. I don't see Mark forgiving that cop. I can only imagine if he appears again and Mark will get his long overdue revenge.

As for that ending, now I am really looking forward to seeing what happens next.

It's been a while since I have reviewed, especially because I hadn't read this lately, but now I am back.

Okay, so a few months ago before reading this, I really wondered how the reunion between Mark and Alison would go down. I'm glad you didn't make it so awkward, as they clearly maintain their feelings for each other.

I like the part about her going to see that fortune teller. When you described her, I clearly had a vision of Miss Cleo or even Auntie Poulet from Vice City, whom was voiced by Miss Cleo (RIP). Very good inside from the fortune teller when she told Alison about being divided between two men.

I will say that it got more intense during the bit with Mark and the Vagos and Aztecas. Now I am curious about these visions Mark had while under the influence of drugs. As for Gwen and Lee, I am suspecting that she might warm up to him now, but I could be wrong. Because I remembered a previous chapter when Task had a crush on that one woman, whose name I forgot. I will see what will happen next.

Great chapter brother and stay safe & healthy brother cause im hoping this shit ends soon. I already have one guy threatening us that he will shoot the place up cause he wants to visit but our place is under quarantine i work at retired place called blueberry hill rehabilitation and healthcare center.

I'd go to Vizor someday. With nothing short of an army to liberate it. Take a bunch of Comanches with me to burn the town down. Whether or not that happens point is I wouldn't go there without a few extra brown people to at least have enough guns to spark some fear in the rest of them we're not victims we can't be anymore.

I'm light skinned i got a distinct look i wonder if they'd spot something was off i think so yeah in
that part of Texas but then theeres people up here that are retarded when it comes to race mostly white boomers they'll know im "Something else" mixed with white or just unsure. I only wonder just cause being on the lighter side of the spectrum ive been mistaken for Chicano but then when people thought if they guessed wrong about what i was which the correct guess was first they'd say Italian or Greek I told you about that which is still weird to this day. But i just don't know whats in white peoples heads is all.

Not much going on in terms of action but the appearance of Miguel I didn't see that coming this chapter.

Interesting having Jill compare the two cities and honestly I was looking at Oklahoma in regards to that not just cause of gas but it is great gas prices there but also gun laws and let's be honest 45,000 there is like 90,000 in California I want to go there but

We're all better off than NY let';s just be honest about that. It has reached the rez out there too upstate and into our rez';s in Canada but we've actually contained it as far as i know in the rez that is based on Paul's it's just 1-2 cases and now no community members can leave and non tribal members can't come in.

But NYC has 33,000 cases my state has a bit over 3000.

Brief but shall we say interesting lemon between the three and it's interesting they're even having that debate about marriage Pau would have been in that predicament too in fact he was before Aila died. That's just the thing you can hae polyamorous relationships but people like that may wanna try and not get married because until they legally let you do it they'll try and make it so that you hae to pick one to marry and make you choose a favorite. The only way it wouldn't be bad in this case is if it was presented to Mark the way it was.

Still I don't know who he'd actually marry between Allison and Ana and maybe you don't either and even if you do maybe it';s better if nobody does know.

Interesting you mentioned a couple heists Aztecas did with the BSU but glossed over them also I can see how Jill's conversations would be upgraded now by the standards of DNB pluis they liked her but saw her as an outsider still culturally. If she was among the Red Warrioors in Canada the conversations would be a mix with some like Ace being on the dumber side, ?Paul and Dawn being smarter plus Shep to a point but in a mopre prison smarts more than book or streets and then Little Joe would just be cracking jokes but even then it'd be the same look of you're an outsider where as BSU embraces her. Surprised nobody's tried to get in her guts yet. Maybe her being ex LSPD would be a deterrent possibly depending on how many know

I wonder why red states have begtter gas prices i was gonna assume Oklahoma and Texas do because of being oil states but that doesn';t explain why other red states that aren't also have great gas prices. It might have something to do with liberals taxing shit more which...theres an upside and a down side i mean we do need to make some greener changes but most people cant see beyond that but dude we got roughly 11 years to try and fix the planet up. I could go on about that but ill just say these companies say it's as much our fault as theirs which is a lie true that we do need to make changes but they also do shady shit behind the scenes there;s a reason they put their $ in the caymen islands the taxes are low;/

This is quite possibly the most violent chapter I have seen thus far in this story. Even the one with Mark vs. Brian comes close, as well as the one with the strip club shootout. Because the warehouse job was pretty bloody, as was the bit with Task, Adahy, and the others going after the Spanish Lords.

I really wonder how the reunion between Mark and Alison will go down. I will read that soon.

I know you said that Cosmic was based on The Truth, but I initially envisioned him as Alien, James Franco's character from Spring Breakers.

As for the big action scene, I know you mentioned your Fast and Furious parody name and this whole bit reminded me of that race sequence from 2 Fast 2 Furious when all those guys race to go get to a car at a boatyard. Except it was more violent.

I had a feeling that Alison wasn't going to be gone for long. So I will see what you have in store for her.

As for Brian's death, I knew he would die sooner or later but not this soon. I thought he would try to break out and find a way to get back at Mark. But there is only so much one man can do.

As for the canon character, I shall see who that will be.

I figured Rapid & Ruthless was based on Fast & Furious. Anyway, that was one epic encounter between Mark and Brian (Just saying that reminds me of an old radio show). I did not see Tavon's death coming, at least not from Brian. I know Mark is ruthless at times, but Brian makes him look like a saint in comparison. I know that this was written a while ago, but I really wonder if he returns at some point. I'll just have to see. It was a bit of a surprise to see him get apprehended, as opposed to killed.

More on Tavon's death. I knew that he had it in for Mark. One was because of the thing with Alison, because it was clear that he liked her, but she didn't feel the same way. The other was the thing with Tavon's brother. But when I read that chapter a while back, it did surprise me that he would order the hit on Mark. I didn't take him for a dirty cop, but I didn't take him for an honest cop, either.

I know I haven't read and reviewed it lately. I got into another story, but now I'm back and I will read and review it more. I think I will also check out Roman Empire, and like when I read O.K.'s stories, Ballad of a Cholo and Concrete Jungle, I will separate them. Speaking of Concrete Jungle, I know that you two have done crossovers, but I will continue reading this, but also read that one on the side. I don't want to feel confused.

Anyway, that's all I have to say. I will read and review some more soon. Much love.

I was not in the least bit surprised to see that Tavon would set up Mark like that. There is a multitude of reasons. One is that Alison and Mark have something going on and Tavon is clearly jealous of it. The other was the tiff those two got into at the hospital. I wonder if he is dirty. Of course, there are different types of dirty cops and he is dirty enough to get a dangerous hitman to do his bidding, especially since Tavon and Brian are both rivals to Mark.

You have made references to Boardwalk Empire. I think I should check out that show.

Anyway, I am looking forward to the big heist.

Okay, I will say that I enjoyed that erotic sequence. I also felt the passion between Mark and Alison. That was pretty hot.

As for other stuff, good job on the chase/shootout sequence.

Man, that shootout in the club was brutal! I really thought that Brian was dead, but if you really wanted to keep the conflict going, you had to have him survive.

I really wonder what will happen next after reading that cliffhanger.

It didn't seem like Task approved of Adahy's partnership with Danyen. I really wonder what will happen there.

I'm telling you, I'm really getting into this.