Jesus Christ this was amazing. any chance you'll do a sequel/follow-up? ending was great, but Salem is still a thing, id love to be see your depiction of her, as well had how you'd go forward with the story given... events that transpired within your version of the timeline, I think there's a ton of potential there. that, and I REEEEEEAAAALLLLY want to see how you'd follow up that ending! great job, and PLEASE make a sequel!

Anyone else might have called him foolish, accused him of being a man trying to dig through a wall with his fingernails.

Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird.

The question is: did you watch that doctor who episode before coming up with the idea, or do great minds simply think alike?

This is my go to story when I just want to read something epic. I love it and hope you continue writing for years and years to come!

Random to leave a review now since I read this story over 2 years ago but I just wanted to say that the one thing that always kinda bothered me in the story was Yang calling Weiss and Jaune mom and dad.

Well now that I'm college living with a bunch of my friends it's kinda a joke in the house to call one of the guys here the dad of the house. So now I don't think it's as weird cause I'm living it now lol.

So I've already read through this story once and the one thing I always found weird was how Yang started calling Weiss and Jaune mom and dad but now that I'm in college living with my friends it's become a bit of a joke in our house to call one of the guys who lives here father.

Absolutely amazing story. You are a great writer and let noone else tell you otherwise. While relic of the future is what got me to find you. This is the story that I am fully in love with.

You know i still think this one is ur Best story and i would have loved a continuation but oh well beggars can't he choosers!

Happy 32nd birthday, Couer! Thanks for giving us all the great stories!

I told you I'd do it. You should have expected this. won't let me post the exact same review so I'm gonna have to add a meme or something to each one. It's like the 12 days of christmas song except it's memes and your birthday.

You thought it was a constructive review, but it was me, the birthday Anon!

Your candles have already been blown out.

-Slides right in- Good evening, and happy birthday.

Happy birthday, make sure to have a blast!

Cake to frosting ratio? Perfectly balanced, as all things should be.

Here's a little lesson in trivia, your birthday's already listed in couerpedia. If you are a writer #1, make sure to have a birthday full of fun!

Now remember Couer, always dispose of your wrapping paper properly. Never, ever flush it down the toilet, only villains do that.

A Couer that's having a midlife crisis is an Avengers level threat.

Loved the story, Had a great plot twist near the end, Icy Knight fans are cheering. But I was wondering we get some kind of "After the Not-So-Fall" finishers? Like what would sort of happen later on now that Cinder's plan got derailed? Such as them meeting Blake's parents with Ghira and Jaune arguing over who is best dad, going to Atlas and seeing Jacques Schnee react to her claim, Them all looking for Raven with Yang, and spending some quality team time in Ansel with Jaune?

Beautiful story. I had ta take breaks occasionally or I'd shatter my phone. Oof. 90% of it made me ill. There were some very bright points tho. Not that I can remember them.

Second read through of this story. What a gem!

I realized half way through the chapter.
Hooo-ho-ho-holy SHIT!

Omfg this was such a great story. I loved it.

a third of this book features jaune in beacons infirmary I've a feeling you've got some kinda
injury kink couer

And with this, I finish another great story indeed.