That's really interesting how you put the Blood Elven stigma against the undead in this! Nice touch!

Vanessa seems like a 'charming broad-... I mean elf.

Life lessons? Don't do nice things for people if it involves warlocks. You're almost guaranteed to end up as a pile of sludge.

Well, fat lotta good all those warlocks did huh?

Great chapter! Updatith soon!

Well Khamû seems to be in an even better mood than usual!

Wow. The assassins certainly have quite a bit of cannon fodder to send against Malic. Do they have to write a letter to every family or?... Because that's a ton of letters.

Yep, you definitely got his personality. A sarcastic jack*ss.

A favor in the future? Oh god help us.

She? I have to wonder who 'she' is if they're talking about her like that.

Great chapter! Hope to see more soon!

I don't think I've ever seen the words 'Forsaken Warhorse' and 'Good sign' in a sentence before without the word 'not' in between them.

"The master will be most displeased." Part of me just wants the 'master' to be like "Eh, whatever. Hated him anyways."

Yay! More Goblin abuse! It's fun for the whole family!

There are certain things you never want happening to you. A void lord popping up behind you is definitely one.

Haha, Khamû is having fun!

Welcome to the forsaken, where plastic surgery is as easy as taking off a corpses jaw and sewing that son of a b*tch right on!

Oh so the human was the smart one!...kinda.

I just like to imagine the reactions of the other hotel patrons walking by Khamû in the hallway while he's carrying the corpses.

Great chapter! Hope to see more soon!

Well that was a chapter and a half!

I'm quite interested to hear more about these assassins! They certainly seem like they know what they're doing.

Also I still love Khamû!

On an unrelated note, why is it that Goblins live in a magical world where zombie armies and world ending dragons are like a bi-weekly thing, yet they think a bulky bruiser will do next to anything in a fight.

Great chapter! Hope to see more soon!

Heheh... Scarlet Crusaders are fun to pull apart!

Khamû seems like a warm n' fuzzy chappie!... You know. If void lords could feel any emotion besides rage and disgust.

"mind if I call you mal?" "yes!" Wow have I been in that sort of situation before...

Aw! Ace and Khamû are bonding!

Hmm... I assume these are the assassins from the summary?

Great chapter! Hope to see more soon!

Warcraft fic!... *heavy breathing*

Kazzim is going to die by the end of this isn't he? He's too... Gullible...

Ace seems like the sort of person who cries about no one loving him when he's alone.

I too obey books which give me orders!... OH WAIT NO I DONT DUMB GOBLIN!

Well there's the Tome of the Lost Legion doing its thing. Yay!

More! More! Great chapter! More!