I imagine yang infecting Ruby when Ruby is in the verge of dying "instead of wiess getting wounded it Ruby" after yang finds were she is going.

Then this story is great, everything is very well structured and I am happy to know that although Yang lost his humanity, he still totally senses coming back because I feel that Yang's problem of being on an island is going to be solved with this robbery and you are still alive if you it's like this take care

Make more please

Waaaaaagh?

What the hell is a Warhammer 40K orc doing here?

Would request a declaration if this fanfic is dead or not. I hope for the latter as this fanfic is superlative

Good story. Is this dead or is first foray par 1 getting a sequel?

Make more please! And is Yang gonna make a new zerg? If she does it will be terrifying. And is Ruby and others gonna find out about Yang?

...more plz?

Actually creature Abatrhur is very combat cabable he did survive in the tunnels under Char killing anything that got too close when the Overmind died. Abathur might not be made for combat but he is not defensless. (In my upcoming story I have a clone of Abathur wich is able to use Fungal Growt, Neural Parasite and Spawn Vile Roach. Those are some abilitie that I think would fit him.)

Why the sudden stop

What a great story, hope more chapters get added

ORKS?!

Por favor continua, es muy interesante. Sigue así

10/10 please continue
While yang may not be my favorite Kerrigan and are remarkably similar so