That was ADORABLE.

Interesting story dude so far it was a good 1st read for a 1st chapter & nice humour

This is great I can definitely see this as a possible movie or special if they would ever bring the show back can't wait to see an update hopefully soon

Heh this is lovely, I honestly could see this as the kickoff for their return if they do a special or another season.

Great! Seems to be very interesting and I'll look forward for your updates :D
Love,
K.

Great story man can't wait for more

Wow, can't wait for more :D

I liked the callbacks to the show. I just have to question if we'll see Rick & Morty references.

Holy mother of sweaters! This is amazing! You, the author, are a wonderfully lovely person who has captured their personalities perfectly. And I don't say that to everyone. Only the best.
SO IF YOU STOP UPDATINGNI WILL SUMMON BILL AND FIND YOUR HOUSE, AND MURDER EVERYONE DEAR TO YOU, THEN ONCE YOU UPDATE BRING THEM BACK TO LIFE!
On second thought, killing them would be messy. I'll just turn them into zombies.

Pls don't stop updating.

this has potential let's see where it goes

A flucking mazing you captired thier persanalities perfectly.

This looks really promising. I want more! I'LL GIVE YOU MY BLOOD!

mmm i like it

Amazing feels like a proper sequel also PART 2 NOW!

Welcome back and it's good to see you haven't lost your touch. I personally didn't get all that into Gravity Falls but this chapter was a very enjoyable read, can't wait to see what else you come up with.