I don’t get get why people say this story is bad it’s pretty good and I don’t mind the dialogue it’s pretty good the read I’m still waiting on Qrow reaction to ichigo would be great if u could finish it it KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Fuck this is bad. How is this still your best story.

Aww man, this is super entertaining. Kind of upset that there's no more chapters forthcoming.

Only issue I see in this is that the dialogue is a lot of monologue. Your characters just... talk too much at a time. It's unrealistic.

Also, people aren't really reacting 100% right to stimuli.

So basically, this isn't super well done, but it's still incredibly entertaining, and I'm upset that I won't get to read more of it.

This is now completely stupid, and I love it.

I was halfway through reading this when I realized I had read it before. Re-read the whole thing. It's pretty good, I hope you come back to fan-fiction some day.

Too bad you didn’t give him the long hair. It looked badass but I guess some people like to fuck over others.

this chapter was bad atleast the part which you made ichigo tell as his story

this is just no

hes already in his soul form

Weiss crush on Ichigo felt forced

didint Yang and Ruby have different mothers.
If i remember right Yangs mom was named Raven and Rubys Summer Rose

this fic is interesting the idea is good, but the story needs some work it feels too rushed.

could have changed the initiation

fighting scenes writing felt rushed

really hope you will save pyrrha