Too bad Elle got arrested but that did not happen in the real criminal minds I think...

Good chapter, and happy to learn than you will torturing him more, i didn't have enought here ;)

Kiss

Glad you continued this story. I'm still enjoying it. I always thought there was something "off" with her. When Elle came back from her absence after being shot, she looked like she was nuttier than a fruitcake. Her haircut was terrible.

You probably don't need to keep repeating the summary at the beginning for every chapter. It's the same as the synopsis. Between that and replying to each each reviewer takes quite a bit or room on the page. Just sayin'

So, Reid got shot again? He's not going to be able to hold on much longer with two gunshots. The team better find him soon, or else all they will find is a body. . .his body. Let's hope Reid is at the hotel.

I think the BAU will figure out who she is quickly. If they say, few times, someone will remember how "off" she was right before she walked out on them.

Interesting, but sad for Spencer with the story of the baby...

Without that, i have some difficulties with the addiction of Spencer who make the other in the comportment in this point (like Morgan)... Like in the serie almost nobody speak of it, i like to know than Reid have pass out alone (and yeah, something with the na well) but you understand, than the team doesn't help him, and the reaction of his collegue is the opposite of that...

Look forward for the next chapter, kiss

It isn 't clear if Spencer dreamed of being drugged or if he was actually drugged. Also Elle would really have to be mentally broken to go after Spencer. So that's a interesting angle. Maybe there's a medical reason, not just a "stressor" reason. Spencer, if any of them, made efforts to just be her supportive friend. If she had a break, you might expect to her to be extra protective of him, not necessarily picking him off.

I feel like they might have at least discussed making a television appeal for the return of Dr. Reid, and not wait two days for a lead. Perhaps a scene discussing why they did not make an appeal - for example the DC area not being a small town and thus it being harder to appeal to the community - but they may have been able to appeal to unsub(s).

That was wild from start to finish...

Great story so far, really enjoying it :) Keep up the great work :D

Hiya, please could you update this story. Many thanks. xoxox

Oh oh oh ho. My first thought when I read the summary was: L, from Death Note.

Neat story, i'mma go read the rest, now.

I love this story! It keeps getting better and better with each chapter. Keep up the good work!

Oh my god, poor poor Reid! This broke my heart and I never thought I'd say that but Elle is such a bitch in this fic! This is truly amazing, cant wait for the next chapter!

She was not "right" when she left the BAU. I've always thought, she and Reid had a rendezvous in the hotel room. I wonder if the child was his and he never knew it.
Carry on. I'm really enjoying the story