how can ed get his alchemy back I wonder?

The next ! The next ! The next ! I hate being left on a cliffhanger !

Please update! It's wonderful beginning of the story. I wish one day i can read it complete :)

Do you think you will continue in the future?

Very interesting !

Please update... This is yet another highly original plot, I am so excited to learn what happens next... Is there any way you can make it so that Ed gets his alchemy back or faces near death or something like that? Sorry about all these requests, I'm just really excited to find out what happens. :)

i tried to click on the third chapter and i was like "no!" when i saw you havent gotten it up yet... update soon please.

Great start! Looking forward to how this is going to continue. Keep up the good work!

Length is not what makes a good story, it is the quality. Still doing a good job. Keep writing and I'm glad you're feeling better.

An interesting premise and so far well executed. You are setting a bar here, and I'd certainly like to see you live up to it. Keep up the good work and I'll certainly stick around.