really wish there was more! I just love how this story brings out a different side of Jasper

I have always loved this story. I hope you feel creative one day and finish it. Much love!

really hope theres more this is amazing

Aww that was a sweet chapter. You're really good at writing dialogue. It feels very natural.

Now if you just took pity on your readers and write a bit more... puh-leaseeee? Pretty please?

I liked the chapter. I wish Anna Lee came back at the end of it so that they could have more interaction with Jasper but it was so really good.

technically, Anna shouldn't know that they aren't human. Just that they're hiding something and Bella knows about it. That's all that Eddie boy slipped. People don't usually assume that something unnatural is going on when they're faxed with secrets.

Ok I'm in, you got my full attention by now which is probably stupid since there's only a few more chapters written but oh well, is still seems worth it and I want to enjoy it for as long as I can. I definitely loved the part with Jasper. Conversation between Jasper and Anna was great. I love the sense of humor you gave them. Really really wish you'd write more.

On the down side- Bella is still not even one percent zombie - like. I feel like you could've waited a bit for her to be goofing around with her cousin.
Anna suspecting sth strange is off too. Jasper might look and behave older than a teenager but that would not explain her magically figuring out what he might be. Unless her revelation is that she decides he's very dense and had to repeat school years over and over again.
Also I'm super confused about the timeline. I thought that maybe you had Bella and Edward break up early in the summer before her senior year but it seems she's only now starting the junior year. I wonder if it means she moved to live with her father a year earlier and how much of the original events leading to the new moon storyline actually happened. Wish you explained that a little better if you decided to do things differently not only from the point where you start but to also change the events before the 'now' of your story.
Oh and did you really had to saddle Alice with an idiot for a mate? I feel soooo sorry for her.

Hi, I'm not sure if you ever read this, it seems you stopped working on this story a while back. Still, maybe you'll get back to it one day.
So far I like the idea. I hope your oc will not turn out to be either Mary Sue or a 'tough bitch'. So far I like her though. I'm a little confused about the Cullens staying in forks. I hope you'll explain Edward's logic in breaking up with her and still staying in the city. I'm also a bit confused at Bella's behaviour. She's supposed to be like zombie but so far it seems she behaves perfectly normal. Holding a normal conversation with Charlie, enthusiastic about her cousin visit, excited about the guest room redo. She was more energetic in the scene that I would've been. Can't really see the zombie in her

Ahhh! I really hope you update soon.

I love how the story is going so far, it’s interesting and I’m so happy Bella is gonna get over Edward and drop him like a hot potato! And Jasper 3 I love seeing him like this.

Hope you haven’t drop the story

Ahhh I love this, it’s sooo good
Please update soon xx

please please please update soon! I need more of this story!

Alright, I absolutely loved this! Can't wait for Anna and Bella to go to the Cullen's to eat ;)
I'm really glad Edward is dealt with for the moment and that we could skip a depressed and catatonic Bella! And instead we have her beside her kick-ass cousin, who is charming the pants-off Jasper!
So yeah, if I was not clear enough I'm really excited to read more and hope you can update soon, so good luck with your writing! :3
Btw, can't wait to see Rosalie and Emmet's impresion of Anna! ;)

Nothing justified his abuse. He still did it consciously. Blaming bloodlust is just pathetic.

Edward doesn’t deserve someone like Bella, neither does he deserve Alice. He should spend eternity alone!