Reviews for Papa Pain |
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Whovianeverlark17 chapter 3 . 3/25/2019 wow, this is amazing. Screw Gabriel. but yeah, I love this! |
hnh058513 chapter 2 . 10/12/2018 He also has her body as soon during queen's battle |
Glimare chapter 3 . 9/20/2018 Loved the reveals, loved the action, loved this story! well done! I think I will enjoy the next story too. X3 |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2018 I love that you put subdigitals in this. Made my day lmao. Also love your stories. They have me laughing till I'm crying. |
Well duh chapter 3 . 6/14/2018 Instead of turning into ladybug and really stupidly revealing her identity she could have just jumped out the window or sprinted out the door |
NoMeImporta32 chapter 2 . 12/11/2017 Please continue! |
Staria's Light chapter 3 . 6/5/2017 So... I was wondering. Is the SubDigitals in this story is related to Code Lyoko one or just your own idea? Btw, your Miraculous Ladybug stories are so good! |
partypoison867 chapter 3 . 3/4/2017 Wow...this was a wild ride and a pleasure to read at 2:53 am this Saturday morning |
Mr. Spinner chapter 3 . 3/2/2017 This piece was excellent! Your characterization is good, your description and worldbuilding are beautifully done, the plot was well-written. Titling the chapters/segments after the villians was a nice touch. Special mention to Papa Pain, that akuma was an inspired piece of work. Keep up the good work, Moth! |
Ytak chapter 3 . 12/28/2016 I really liked this. It was well written, fast paced and action packed. Which is just want I wanted to read. Two thumbs up. |
Brokenwings35 chapter 2 . 12/6/2016 Great chapter. |
Brokenwings35 chapter 1 . 12/5/2016 I loved the chapter. |
yellow 14 chapter 4 . 9/7/2016 Damn, sorry forgot to mention, but France has socialised medicine. Natalie wouldn't have to pay for her operations |
yellow 14 chapter 3 . 9/7/2016 Sabrina is pretty scary. (I like seeing Ms Bustier's response to Marinette's transformation. "Yes Ladybug, you may go") Keep writing |
Wai-Jing Waraugh chapter 3 . 6/24/2016 Whoa. This is very big! Almost everything in the entire Miraculous set-up has changed for the heroes. This story is pretty ambitious! I'll try to start reading the sequel sometime soon, there are so many plot threads here that I'd like to see explored futher: Nathalie and Alya as allies, Adrien coming to terms with his father's betrayal, Marinette's new powers, the students finding out who Ladybug is, Chloe's reign of terror coming to an end... it's all pretty intense! Great job! |