Hello, I really like that story and the way it blends in, but you have a lot of spelling errors. And I would like to know when you are going to release the next chapter. Also I have some questions about the story and was wondering if you could answer any of them? And I think you could have done better on piecing it together. Like kirito having a visit from a man to inform him about a game that's basically coping SAO or the fact that kirito ask his friends for help, because in SAO 2 he doesn't tell his friends about in game killing and try's to keep them out of it. Other than that I like the story and can't wait until the next chapter.

can you update already? i want to see what happens next

This whole book is a cringy piece of shit... I LOVE IT. 2/10 stars

sorry, but the spelling is horrible

Oh! My! Goodness! I LOVED this chapter! And I can't wait for you to write more!

I just read the first chapter and it's an amazing start! I can't wait to read more. On to the next chapter I go~ OO

More more more more more more, I need more!

This looks really interesting! I'm hoping you intend to finish this!

This story's real interesting, I can tell ya that. But I have noticed a lot of errors, mostly spelling errors, and one part just confused me, with Kirito reading about Bladeslayer Online and it says "Logging out is possible" and then the next line saying "Oh by the way, you can't log out". I think you should've worded it a bit differently. So maybe in the future you could double check your work. None the less this is a really great book and I'm looking forward to the future of this creative story.

Good start I like where this is going. Please update sooner this story is my life right now.

Logging out will be possible. Oh, by the way, you can't log out. I'm getting mixed signals here. Also, would it be possible to explain how Zootopia and SAO are in the same universe? I'd love to hear that explanation. Keep writing!

I'm curious, how come Kirito, Nick, and Asuna can communicate with one another? If everyone could do it, there's be a crisis because eventually someone would realize what's going on... This is an interesting story, I'm looking forward to more!

Kirito damn right. Its time for the Black Swordsman to enter the game of Blade Slayer Online and completely and totally wreck every monster's shit up.

Well from a simple message to a full-on mission, it looks like Kirito and the Gang are going to log in to an intense-difficulty VRMMORPG...
It makes me wonder if/when someone finds out that these "attuned animal" players are intact animals, and some of these "odd animal" players are humans?... And just a simple question that may/WILL be brought up from this; How can a VR be connected to two different realities?...

Finally, I can imagine Nick TRYING his best to continue his daily life, but like a certain impulsive Glided-Hero, he's gonna dive into bSO one way or another to find Judy!

So a direct message to Kirito and Asuna huh?...
Let's hope they get a game plan for BladeSlayer Online and save some trapped Players!~ :D