the plot: interesting
your sentence structure: suicide inducing

Listen I don't know why your not updating but this story is to good to just put down so please if you have any free time please work on this story again.

Good fic, man

Keep it up

Wonderful update and tatsumi saving kurome’s life and as well as chelsie still being alive

Good work so far, can't wait to see the next chapter. Also, what's the pairing going to be, it says it's going to be Percy and Akame but the setting and development of the characters is giving off a Harem vibe, which would be pretty cool to read.

it's a good chapter

Veri n1c3kayst0riuM

I wish it was a esdeath x tatsumi fic, but this is nice too

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Well, I can't complain cuz it's was an interesting chapter but I would loved to see about Chelsea thanking Tatsumi properly for saving her or showing a little more affection to him due to his state back then , just saying

I personally think you should've brought some of the Elite 7 onto the scene to even the numbers a bit, considering there's two extra raiders this time around, but other than that, It's a good set up for next chapter. And don't worry about how long it'll take to upload. All that matters is that A. the quality is good. And B. you don't be like me and go like 9 months without updating... wtf am I doing with my life...?

100th review!

Update soon please

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