Are you going to continue this? I read this all night! I really loved it!

My Sammy! Wonderful angst. Love that Dean still carries the trauma of John selling his soul because he fucking WOULD. Also love Crowley as a checkmating ruthless son of a bitch. Because he IS.

"The nature of nurture had already possessed her, and it was damn near impossible to resist a strong willed woman in mama bear mode."

Love this. She went Full Ellis. Lol

I need more Sammy pain!

As always, your lyrical style is seductive. I have to say I smiled happily when I saw you named her Xael. Lol.

I have no clue what Mystery's random accent is for but I assume she has a purpose.

I love the image of John smoking. We never see it in the series but it just FITS him.

And thank you for writing Crowley as intelligent and cunning and not a retard. ;)

Uh oh.

Damn, girl. You haz the poetry. I love your writing. Love it! Beyond your storytelling even. I end up savoring your words...stop it. I'm jealous!

Yay! The Sam pain begins! Wait. I mean poor Sam. Yeah.

As always, freaking awesome imagery. Mother Nature hates a demon... awesome line.

Old habits die hard... John, STILL not telling the boys anything.

I love how Sam hides the pain he's in the whole time. My stoic baby. The winchester I'm fine battle cry until he is throwing up and passing out.

Poor baby. Needs Danielle... wait... off track again.

Also, love how even though John is a Demon, Dean's betrayed hurt wounds him at his core worse than torture...there's still JOHN there.

AH! SAM! AH! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Mystery is sure one kick ass chick. I am glad they caught up with Dean and Sam. Now on to what...

Great chapter. Loved the action. It's like popcorn and movie candy I can't gobble fast enough.

I love the image of Mystery just driving over the demon bodies like a bad ass. Poor John...why would you hurt him? What mad woman would make him gasp and choke on blood? ;)

I hope nothing happens to Sammy soon. *whispers, hurt Sammy.*

Oh wow. That was intense! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ah! Ah ah ah! That was intense! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Why do I enjoy the little scenes like Freya and Castile so much. Will we see them working together at some point? *hopes*
You dropped a bigass bomb on me but I can't talk about it without spoilers. But now I want it. Can you imagine the self loathing? I can. And the sweet sweet angst. Or will that be another story?

I'm loving how JW is battling against his demonic nature. More, please! I always love angst. And how rich and juicy it tastes. Non non non. Demonic angst has a bitter sweet smoky flavor. Very satisfying.

It's so good to see you back. I've missed you and your awesome story. I couldn't find it again or remember your name to be able to search for it or you. Are you taking requests? I'd like a story with JW and his kids in the car doing anything, going anywhere with some focus on Baby. I've started a Baby community and I'd love to have your storytelling talent showcased in it . You got the chops for it.
*hugs you*