Reviews for Jump City Assassin
AGConstantine chapter 12 . 8/17
R U gonna continue this?
Yakuza2010 chapter 12 . 5/20
Great chapter as usual my friend i wonder what will happen in the symbol of hope city. But i got a feeling certain memories will pop-up on naruto about a mission he did for the shadows years back. Keep up the good work update soon peace.
D4rkpunch chapter 4 . 5/20
What kinda of crap assassin is this? Making Naruto fell again and again in shitty situations when he is supposedly to be trained and competent enough with Ra's approval to go alone on his revenge (this is practically Sasuke with Naruto skin -"). And this side quest with shikamaru is annoying... Just let Naruto take the fucking information and continue with the main plot. Shikamaru being so intelligent to blackmail an assassin who he doesn't even know if Naruto wouldn't just kill him when he lowers his guard ("I'm desperate and whatever happens I have my shadows to lock him in place 'cause I'm obviously more trained than this ASSASSIN, who needs heroes when you can blackmail an assassin").
Samuel Santillan chapter 12 . 5/18
me encanta ya quiero saber que tan bueno es este equipo un genio shikamaru ,arttemisa que vien de una familia de delicuentes muy habiles que trabajan para RA Y A SIDO etrenada por naruto que es un guerreo fiero habile inteligente capaz de superar a batman jason que fue entrenado por batman y asesinado por guason regresado a la vida con mas fuerza y con mas determinacion y ferocidad y por ultimo terra entrenada por slade y con unpoder muy grande que coasa haran esto uotlaws y que logran
Toorafc chapter 12 . 4/26
Loving this story and can’t wait to see the next update.
goldshqipe chapter 12 . 4/10
BRUUUUUUH YOU DOING US DIRTY LIKE THIS. CONTINUE THIS PLEASEEEEEEE

To be honest, I like that this doesn't follow Canon a lot, you're bringing you're own element and it's fucking amazing I love it and a lot of other people are loving it.

PLUS I'M WAITING FOR TRIGON TO RETURN AND THEN I WANT TO SEE IF NARUTO WILL REVEAL HIMSELF AND THE OUTLAWS AND TEEN TITANS WORK TOGETHER TO DEFEAT TRIGON

that would be epic

Peace : hope you continue this
mastercheif1229 chapter 12 . 3/23
Great story so far! I hope that you update it at some point!
sladerules chapter 12 . 3/15
Ya know, I really like this story. But as time went on, I feel like there are various Flaws that could have been tweaked or done better.

One of the biggest flaws is generally through the characters. Almost everyone in this story jumps to conclusions or even acts out of character incredibly fast. We reach certain stakes in an extremely short period of time. And at points, it does seem a bit Jarring.

I also feel like Robin is probably the most well written out of this fic. Because even though he’s right, his belief is almost entirely in response to Naruto’s connection to Harley. He’s paranoid and Biased, but his intentions and predictions at the end of the day is Accurate.

I mean even in the last Chapter. His assumption that Naruto is responsible for breaking into Titans tower makes sense, and all the pieces are there. What’s worse is that he didn’t even accuse Naruto of being Thaelab this time. He just said Naruto broke in.

And when we see Raven straight up Ignoring the proof in front of her face, it becomes incredibly hard to support her either.

If anything, I think Robin’s attempt to catch Naruto is all in all more compelling than His relationship with Raven. There are a lot of parallels between the two that would have made their rivalry far more interesting to watch.

So overall, if your intentions were to make me Dislike/disapprove of Robins Accusations and actions, you’re getting the exact opposite from me.
ethan.lukkar chapter 12 . 2/14
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon
YeagerMeister31 chapter 12 . 2/13
Well, that was amusing I can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 11 . 2/13
Well, things are getting interesting I wonder what happens next I am curious though that nobody saw the similarities between Naruto and Terra lol
YeagerMeister31 chapter 10 . 2/13
Well, that was pretty cool wonder what happens next.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 9 . 2/13
Well, that was interesting so Mito's alive huh damn things are picking up.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 8 . 2/12
Well, that was interesting but I still hate Robin and hope Naruto kicks the fucking shit out of that fake loser, although now Slade's involved I wonder what his reasons for this was or was it a simple assignment. Still, it's all part of Naruto and Harley's master plan so I wonder what happens next.

The only downside is that Naruto killed Sakura Haruno my fav female character couldn't it have been some pathetic like the stalking Hyuga oh well.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 7 . 2/12
Well, that was pretty cool, and Robin's being annoying lol
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