Love this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Good for Rose. I'm happy she gets some peace.

Dew Drop Inn lol. Think Charlie and Bella don't want Dean and Sam to be Uneasy Riders.

This was absolutely amazing! great story, fabulous plot. I really want more, or a sequel or something!

Loving ur story so far, and looking forward to more chapters in the future!

Dean would like that sorta adventure genre.

Yay! Cas!

AND GABE!

Oh my Chuck! Cas's little speech to Rosalie made me wanna cry! That's beautiful.

Carlisle!

That bit with Gabe and the cookies, priceless.

Why do I feel like the Cullens are gonna want to become hunters now?

Ok so a quick note on your writting itself: I love the way you are executing this plot, you are doing a great job with the chrachters, Cas is on point.

Oooo this looks AMAZING! I can't wait to read more.

Dean, you have heard of speaker phone haven't you?

I love the bit with Charlie being a hunter, it fits his character rather well if you think about it.

Also, Bella would make a BAMF hunter.

"Sammy had pretty much dedicated his life to getting into college and that had gone to hell in a handbasket..." ahahahahaha that's hilarious.

Dean, stop fawning over the teenager who is like 9 years younger than you at least.

No one need to believe them (except Sam and Charlie, who will).

Until Dawn is LIT AF! Did you know Rami Malek who plays Benjamin from the Egyptian Coven in the second Breaking Dawn movie did the motion capture/acting for Josh Washington in that game?

I love this. It's great. Hits all the right notes.

enjoyed reading this story

way interesting to read

awesome start, glad bella is more aware an smarter in your story

Wonderful story! Great writing!

poor edward, thwarted by a hunter.

Awesome!

Nice.