Reviews for Without
Hurtturnip chapter 7 . 7/22
when is the next chapter coming
Teito145 chapter 1 . 5/9
I really enjoyed this fic. I shed a few tears because I related to this in some ways but keep up the good work
Idkwhyipost chapter 1 . 5/3
I understand that you do not want to rewrite the entire book just because it may seem a bit gay but at the very least please keep on giving out more updates because it's a great story even if it's a bit yaoi but I recommend that instead of rewriting it to remove because of Naruto liking Itatchi you can have it for adoration as a role model since he's the only one to not hate him anyways I hope you're doing well and looking forward to seeing the next chapter soon
AugustoSpiller1259 chapter 1 . 5/3
Thanos: *snaps fingers*
Guest chapter 7 . 4/22
I dislike stories such as this. When authors have so many ideas and they refuse to part with any of them which leads to a clustered introduction to the story that last for awhile. These ones where Naruto is neglected for a few seconds or nonsense then instantly leaves aren't interesting, you could just as easily write a story about Naruto being abused by the villagers and Sarutobi. There's no need for his family to be involved when you make them the D plot behind every other concept that comes to your mind.
Samthman chapter 7 . 4/21
Nice chapter
Harrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 7 . 4/2
This whole fic is very confusing.
plums chapter 7 . 1/5
Honestly, you’re three years into this. It feels like literally nothing has happened. Just a lot of repetition.

Move your plot forward.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/1
Fk I cant understand anything ..what his power and he is helping randomly any1
thor94 chapter 8 . 12/31/2019
copy of chapter 7
DxGRAYxMAN chapter 8 . 12/31/2019
Chap 7 and 8 are the same
Tenshimeowmanga chapter 7 . 7/22/2019
Separating the pov's is the best idea, I almost got confused when it switched from Minato's pov to Itachi's.
Tenshimeowmanga chapter 4 . 7/22/2019
FUCK THE PERVY SNAKE GOT HIM!
Kingkong101 chapter 7 . 5/29/2019
Gay
Mui Carma chapter 7 . 4/18/2019
I completely understand that you will not continue. I love this story and plot so I was wondering if I could also use it in your name?
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