Oh, this was so cute. What a wonderful little story. I especially loved Draco thinking “his father was going to hear about this,” it was a fantastic tie-in and had me choke a little on the water that I was drinking. Everyone was perfectly I’m character, which is saying something; you managed to make Lucius and Narcissa seem like, well, less formidable grandparents than the way most people write them- it was definitely nice to see a softer side of the older Malfoys! (they can’t be dark *all* the time after all, it was refreshing to see them being so sweet with little Scorpious!) I hope you keep writing!

The 'aaaawwwwws' will continue to come up everytime I read this. Loved it!

AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Awww... Draco's an overprotective affectionate dad! So sweet!

Thanks for writing!

Cheers

Draco is an adorable father :)

Ah, that is the sweetest thing.

Aaah, Draco is so overprotective :) I love how he got his teddy taken away. Just once! And the peacocks and their tailfeathers :)

That was beautiful to read. Perfect six-year-old dialog and that is very difficult to pull off. Great job.

Aww...

Scorpius kind of reminds me a bit of Luna. He's very curious and loves fantastic stories about animals. :)

Draco is cutely overprotective. He's not wrong, however, that's there's a lot of mischief a young boy can get into in the Malfoy Manor- like snipping peacocks and books about the dark arts!

Love it! Love it love it love it! The beautiful characterisation of the way Scorpius makes Draco feel and ALL the little details! The dang'rous books! The story which had undergone significant changes! And the peacock - er, whoops, Lucius!
The best bit of all is coming home ... Draco isn't the only one with a slight lump in his throat :')

Love seeing Draco as a parent worried about his son experiencing as many bad things as he did when young. Good writing'

Awww... *chuckle smirk smile*

Fussy, overprotective Dravo is really cute. I also like what chill grandparents Narcissa and Lucius make in this story.

*laughs* Aw this is really cute. I like the bit about the peacocks as well as the fact that Draco is an apparently loving father. Plus, Narcissa laughing! Nice to see she has a sense of humor.

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Good luck on your writing.

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