| Reviews for The Uzumaki Phenex |
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   Flygar chapter 6 . 7/13 A slaving Naruto, how new, "but he's a devil!", race doesnt excuse slavery. Try to persuade me Beelzebub is the most evil Maou with the Evil Piece system |
| surc chapter 6 . 6/12 haha I like how this chapter was started by saying how you deleted 10 chapters the previous author wrote but here we are, zero updates. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/15 Continuarás con la historia algún día ? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/25 Please update |
| sammykordy10 chapter 2 . 1/9 Are you going to update this |
| FuryJoe chapter 6 . 10/25/2019 great story |
| Kise chapter 6 . 10/23/2019 Lanjukan gan bagus ini |
| sammykordy10 chapter 1 . 10/11/2019 Are you going to update this |
| kbruce chapter 5 . 10/10/2019 Bro i dont know why kurokas narutos only bishop he’s ultimate class devil far stronger then her but yet it took both his bishops for her thats some dumb shit right there |
| sammykordy10 chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 Are you going to update this |
| kencalyx chapter 6 . 9/12/2019 But I still love it though If u had not written that you were taking over from the original author I wouldn't have noticed since its just too good Yagaminguyen |
| kencalyx chapter 6 . 9/12/2019 A very different Naruto fanfiction |
| Jerson Vasquez Zuiga chapter 6 . 9/1/2019 Deberías continuar |
| Z019 chapter 6 . 7/1/2019 I going to be blunt...Your grammar sucks. I read a lot of sentences that had the wrong tense and even some words were completely wrong to use. Say, for example in the sentence "Is that even eatable?" the word "eatable" that is a completely wrong word to use since it refers to things that ARE eaten like burgers or pizza and gives a completely wrong idea. You should use the word "edible " since it means things that CAN be eaten and the sentence will say "Is that even edible?" meaning "can that be eaten?" but your gives a wrong meaning. But, this is your story and I'm just giving my honest opinion on the construction of your story so, I hope you aren't offended. You can ignore this if you want, I'm fine with anything anyway. Hope you write more stories and maybe with better grammar. JK. |
| jack26 chapter 1 . 6/15/2019 I think this story would make a good reading story |
