I have a question about Ash's Rapidash, is it a shiny pokemon like his Noctowl in the anime?

I'm with Irontanks on this. Sure the grammatical errors are annoying but I just chose to ignore them or correct them in my mind. Honestly people who act like that don't deserve to be on the internet. Warning I am going to rant here. You if you read a story and you don't like politely leave a review on how the author can improve. You don't act like a little shit head and say the author doesn't deserve to live. Because they have just as much right as you do.

Dont listen to anyone who says this story is trash, I mean yeah the "they said this" thing is slightly annoying, but overall the story is pretty interesting to read and certainly ingore any reviews who say things like "you should not be allowed to live" as people who say those things are just jackasses in general. overall, great story and keep up the good work if possible

Wtf is with the "then said this" its like reading a 7 yr old narrate a stage play to the audience... Complete trash

dude. please stop saying thensaid this.

I wish cosmoenix was a real Pokémon!

Hi amvanras, I hope you've been doing well. It's been really a long, long time since you've updated 'The Ultimate Legacy'. Do you plan to continue further with that story further or are you planning to abandon it? I really hope that you continue with that story as you planned to do earlier on and not abandon it, because I really love your stories, they are the best Ash stories I've ever read here, they are so wonderfully character and plot-driven and presents Ash's journey as a Pokemon trainer in the best manner possible. :)

I fucking hate this shit. You should not be allowed to live. I cant get the "he then said thisfuck out of my brain. Its haunting me no one can possibly live peacefully after reading this fucking shit.

Your writing is sloppy, your storytelling is lackluster. This story does not make sense. And "And then said this" is going to haunt my dreams.

You have a solid premise though. I would love to see this kind of "homecoming" story ... but your execution is just ... well I am sorry but there is no other way to put it ... disastrous.

Just one note on a big continuity error, Lucario beat Mega Lucario in your story not Pikachu. Just thought I'd mention that.

Interesting definitely but my one question is why no Greninja bond phenomenon

I really like the Title you chose for the fanfic and can't wait to see how you write chapters 1 to 6(a.k.a premises).

I love both books and I have read your bio page SOOOO many times I can't wait for the book

How interesting! I'll be sure to keep an eye out for it! :)

Muy bueno