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Hehe that was very cute! Nicely done dear.

jaja pobre judi hay nick que pensamientos

very nice, but about the sweat stained bed sheets, foxes dont sweat...

right after i read this, I had to listen to the song

Nice. Realistic, and sweet. I don't mind the subtlety of it all, though. I was hoping a bit more emphasis on Judy's hips or butt (I love those parts of her) but that'll probably take unnecessary space, so all in all, job well done. Thanks for writing this!

Oh, I like it! :)

Aww. :3
It would be awesome if continued.

Oh Merlin, Nick promises to put bunnies to shame! I'm crying from laughter right now.

I have to say, it was way better than I expected :D Cute and funny.

Having said that, there were a few things that bothered me.

First of all, the structure. The breaks between the paragraphs are awkward. They don't belong, as the scene doesn't change at all. They just cut the action in strange places, making the flow feel off.

Another thing is in the story itself. What exactly was the reason for Judy to take off the shirt before asking if she could move in? It makes no sense if she wasn't going to ask for sex.

You missed an excellent opportunity spelling Wild without the 'e' in the title

Judy seems to be a little OC but its understandable. She was very daring. Also, saying that her parents are probably doing it right now was hilarious! I bet Nick wants to put them to shame ;)
Well, keep on writing.

Peace!

Well it was not so bad:)

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