Rise and shine

Uh oh it's been 3 years with no updates

this story is fucking fantastic!- PV2 Willis

Don't worry for us, do what you have to. I know the quality of work you give when we are patient... amazing chapters I've read for now, I'm really thrilled after reading the angst-chapter. Have a good day!

Any news on updates?

Great story wish it was finished Judy has been in shock for the last 3 years

YOU HAVE FORGOTTEN THE FACE OF YOUR FATHER!

You sir are the most horrendous torturer I've ever read. Why did you gave us such a damn good AU, a traumatic yet engulfing tale to just drop it out of the blue? You keep promising us an end that never came, and now we don't know if you are even alive, shit. The uncertainty is mind wrecking, why must you leave so many question unanswered? At least give us the overall structure of the 4&5 Books, so we can put or minds at ease and fill the blanks ourselves.

I'm not a good enough of a writer to imagine a story to finish this one. Maybe if someone here reads this fic and is brave enough to put down a compelling ending... I don't know maybe we can make try put together the missing books, or something.

I enjoy a government conspiracy story as much as the next guy, but there's one glaring hole in this plot of yours right now. Given her obsession, wouldn't this conspiracy theory have been right up Honey's alley? Why introduce an OC like this? There is LITERALLY NO REASON for Nick to have sought this guy out at this point in time. If anything, he should've been more worried about looking after Honey and preparing his affects for transportation before they were relocated. Why, oh WHY, would he feel at all inclined to go and seek out a complete stranger whom he'd only had ONE very awkward and strange conversation with? Like I said, it would've made FAR more sense if it was Honey who pieced this conspiracy together! However, if you're so dead set on using this OC, it would've made more narrative sense for Nick and Mr. OC to have bumped into one another in the new concentration camps they're heading towards than what you've got here!

update you filthy swine

is the fic dead?

Uh oh, it’s been a year with no updates

dang i was a regular i used to be so happy when a new chapter was out came back to see what's up. to bad i hope you continue the story

This is one of the best story I have read. You can feel the emotion that is running through out the story. So I hope you continue it.J.R

Love this story! Hope you continue it one day soon!