Don't worry about the short chapter, I still enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!

I love your story so far! I'm glad to see that Happy is finally with the group now.

Interesting...

Not a Nice way to end the chapter update soon

Btw I like how they aren't in character bc it's adds to the uniqueness in the story.

Yay Natsu!
Can I suggest getting a BETA, only because there are a couple of spelling and gramatical errors here and there. Nothing too major, so don't worry if you don't want one. I would offer but I can't be a BETA :P
This is really good, you are doing well.

Poor Cobra! I'm quite fond of him!

You are a troller

i like gray...;)

This is a confusing but wonderful and well written au.

No! You did not just end the chapter with Natsu telling Lucy he loves her! You have to update soon! I can't wait!

Can't wait for the next chapter. Very suspenseful

You really needed to edit this before posting. There is a mistake in almost every single line. Even your A.N. has a mistake in it.

i love this sooo much

I very like this story .