Reviews for Team Akatsuki |
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Guest chapter 11 . 8/23 Alucard is that you |
naithaniakansha54 chapter 32 . 6/27 Sir make BTTH and send Madara uchiha and kick there asss |
gogo bananas chapter 1 . 5/15 high key nerfed the shit outta them writing is also kinda forced, it doesnt flow but meh |
ankitmahat chapter 1 . 4/21 If you've saying that they had to use Akatsuki special jutsu on a Nevermore and that Itachi didn't simply brought it down with a single look then I'm afraid that you've already severely nerfed these characters. And I really hate it when people do that. Let's read the next chapter and see if this fanfic is worth reading. |
TARFU chapter 16 . 12/12/2019 I wanted to say, thankyou for this story. So far it has been fun to read. I would like to all of the authors that have taken the less traveled road, and made these stories your own! The site is called fanfiction for a reason. keep up the good work! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2019 "Her body is what an angel would have, perfect in every part; the right curves, right legs, right breasts, etc.c R/menwritingwomen |
Ato chapter 32 . 11/3/2019 More |
Ato chapter 29 . 11/3/2019 THERES MORE SOUP! |
redkin chapter 32 . 8/25/2019 i really have enjoyed this story please add another chapter it would be deeply appreciated i love the family vibe of the akatsuki deidera and sasori bickering remind me of me and my brother please countinue i also believe there should be a chapter that velvet explains to pyrra about itachi and the akatsuki after they get a little closer to one another because velvet would already know about them or have itachi do it still wonderfull story please update it |
Chronosign chapter 2 . 8/7/2019 I hope you continue |
Ikasuki chapter 4 . 7/24/2019 Was this writteng by a kid? "They all landed striking awsome pose with ecplosion behind kaboum yay?" Why is every akastuki member a retard... add everyone else... hum we come from an other world we don't have money... can you give us a building weapons and aircrafts? of course you sound legit boy? Even as a parody it is stupid... well I can enjoy part of the sory but even when puting my brain on OFF mode it is rubbing me the wrong way |
Jalen Mason chapter 16 . 6/23/2019 There was a missed opportunity for that part where Konan was asked what would happen if anyone harmed Nagato. She should've said "I'll show them the true meaning of pain" |
Guest chapter 13 . 6/6/2019 I am legit waiting for team RWBY to finally pop up |
Guest chapter 32 . 5/6/2019 I doubt hidan would lose but ok |
BuddhaBuddha chapter 9 . 4/21/2019 I’ll just point out how OOC most of the Akatsuki members are, and the dialogue and fights are really subpar. |