I'm really interested in how you'd pull Serafall off.
Also, how soon are you going to return to writing, mate? You're a splendid author and I want my fix.

"I would have never been so disrespectful had I known you were high ranking. I apologize Naruto-sama." Exactly. Rias and Sona, like the rest of their race, are presumptuous little cunts who don't have the balls to threaten people with more power than them.

While some of your stories are worth reading, this one doesn't appear to be one of them. First of all, Naruto doesn't have to attend Kuoh Academy; you just decided to make him a little bitch in that moment to cave to Sona's demand. Second, Naruto willingly becoming a Devil is just stupid. Third, Naruto is such a needy little bitch, wanting keep his friends around him for all eternity. And fourth, the potential harem list leaves much to be desired. Rias and Sona have already lost me with the entitled attitudes. And no Grayfia? Why? Such a powerful woman is wasted being a fucking maid to that idiot Sirzechs.

this is really interesting.

Yes please more chapters please like 30 over 300,000 words :-D

Gabriel

Well my dude I'm not good when it comes to writing, luckily computer engineering degree only has me taking a basic class which I'm still getting a C in, so can't give you advice. However I can tell you its good.

Please include Sona or Serafall, Kuroka or Koneko
not both sets of siblings

great i love it
When will we continue?

I wrote a message explaining some vital facts about Dxd the lifespan is a big issue for a Human to be with a Devil but they don’t want Humans marrying to contaminate their bloodline.

The Families of powerful Clans marry for more than just love but for making their lineage more powerful in terms of Magical power.

This fic had potential, but its likely abandoned...pity.

update next

I have really enjoyed reading thus far; the way you have this setup for naruto to become a devil is going to be very interesting to see. especially with the way its going to effect the story going forward. So i really hope that you keep writing this story.

dude update soon
this is quite good

Espero que actualices pronto por que me que de con ganas de saber que pasara en el proximo capitulo actualiza pronto por favor

Tu historia esta genial espero que pronto puedas subir el proximo capitulo por que me muero de ganas por saber que pasara en la conti