Been a year would like to see an update it’s a good story

Hmn I am pretty sure I have come across this fanfic before but I am probably reading it again. One thing that doesn't make sense to me is Orochimaru summoning Manda. I am not quite sure if you wanting this to be different from canon but there should be no need for him to give that away. Also Manda should be strong enough to hold his own against a one tailed Naruto. He isn't just weak and a strong punch should not make a summon disappear. I was disappointed in that scene.

narusaku is such a huge turnoff sorry but i cant stomach that very well lol

Incredible story so far! I hope that you update it at some point! If you do, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Naruto is a pussy

A wind Rasengan is Rasenshuriken though? And how come Naruto wasn't even trying to use Hiraishin or summoning in this fight? Did Kabuto survive? And how if yes? ... you're either overpowering villains or underpowering everyone else except Naruto.
I give up on the canon facts here. This story screwed it up the same way Boruto storyline did. ... ok no. That one still makes less sense lol
But I'm either not catching your descriptions of the fights correctly, or your writing is very inconsistent with the powers the characters should have. And not the ones that would be changed because of deviations made obvious.
Anyway. PET PEEVES.
I shall continue reading once you (hopefully) update. And I'll be off to read some of your other stories now.
Please don't take my reviews as flames. They're not. I'm just confused about some of your choices as a writer this far. It seems a bit rushed and not fully planned. There are enough redeeming qualities for me to continue though. For one, I'm interested in how Sasuke changed, and if he leaves then in how the retrieval plays out given a different hokage and a much stronger Naruto. Also. Kakashi teaching Naruto lightning. It can't be Chidori since that requires Sharingan to use properly. But lightning is bound to have other interesting techniques. Not a good combo with wind tho. Wind cancels out Lightning after all.

Wait so Naruto already has Hiraishin after all? Pretty sure neither Jiraiya nor Kakashi could pull it off because it's very complex sealing and hard on the body. Otherwise everyone would be able to use it as long as they had the kunai. Pretty sure the only way to salvage it is A. Write DNA into the seal. Since Minato reworked it, wouldn't be unbelievable. Or B. Make a kekkei genkai necessary to use it, which means that Minato and Naruto are in some way related to Tobirama directly.
since Naruto obviously can't be a seal master of that calibre yet. Way too OP. And you're already changing up where he thought of a solution for himself and where he was told what to do.
Other than that small thing, I'm really enjoying the story. Sasuke training with Anko was hilarious. And I can just imagine Naruto resisting as Jiraiya and Kakashi attempt to convert him to Icha Icha lmfao

Please update soon, it's quite an interesting story

you used luffys name

eeeewwwwwww Sakura pairings suck. I literally filtered OUT these kinds of fics. if you are considering that bloody pairing mark it as such

WTF -

Surrounded by ANBU after having fought a 4tailes Jinchuriki Orochimaru just vanishes - He was exhausted possibly even wounded and they just let him go WTF !
What about sensor, trackers ?
Why arent they pursuing him this is the prime chance to kill this traitor - not only bold enough to show his face once again in the village but also the one attacking their secret weapon their WMD and they dont even intend to make him pay for it ?

And where is the 3rd Hokage ? he aside from Yamato is the only one currently in the village with the means to stop a rampaging Bijuu (we dont know if Yamato is even in the village at this point in time) - so the 3rd should have also have been there.

What you stated in your comments is wrong -
Orochimaru didnt defeat the 4Tails Naruto Yamato intervened in the fight when Naruto had Orochimaru on the ropes, he was 3 moves away from killing him.

Thats a huge difference if you ask me -

Great story!

if Oro wanted Sasuke to go on in the competition, why would he try to kill Sakura? that would just automatically make it so Sasuke could not continue to the next phase...

Decent chap. Ready for de next one!