Saya is basically the person in the MPD

Please update this story it’s one of the better H.O.T.D. stories I’ve read on this site

I was rather expected in the fact that Takashi and the others leave for Remnant, but not upon the arrival of grimms on Earth. Continue this excellent work please

10/10

Finally you come back

Update please

It is a good story but It feels a little to serious you should add a character for comedic relief like a cowardly pot head that runs fast as hell from everything. But that's just an idea you can do what ever the hell you want, I'm sure you already knew that though.

The idea is interesting, but I'm just having a hard time seeing Mercury and Yang act like this.

Oh god, the pyro can control fire.

Dear Arthur

Your story is actually really good but in my opinion you shouldn't make yang pregnant it wouldn't be a good idea and if you start to have dull thoughts for the story just make yang and mercury fuck again than make her pregnant.

Sincerely,

Gay doppelgänger

you actually right a good story unlike a bunch of stupid ones on this website

Dear aurthor

It is a really good story just don't make yang pregnant now it would slow down the story and it is idea that will do better if you just used it later

Sincerely,

Hold on to your cock

Well, they seem to be the popular guys at the mansion.

The BLOPS 2 track was a nice touch too.

I think I fanboyed as harder than Hirano when I read the MG42

"You two have got to be the most illegal people in Japan."
10/10