That was an interesting read.. Will you be updating it or is it abandoned?

Menma could pass as a foreign orphan abandoned on the street that Naruto found and befriended.

that was good keep the chapters coming

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I loveeeeee this story

So i take the conversation about not being allowed to leave the village was a complete lie and small manipulation directed towards naruto to draw the wrong conclusion?

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good chapter and story you have in this chapter you mentioned ocean and my mind automatically wander to Armin T_T

Loved it. This fanfiction is just so incredibly unique. I don't think that I've ever read anything quite like this before and I honestly can't wait to read more.

You're doing a brilliant job.

sweet job

Another good chapter! What an enjoyable read! So far, everything seems to be going well for the two Narutos. Excluding the glares and all that of course. *Sigh*

I wonder what'll happen next? And why do I've a feeling Marumaru suspects something? Keep it up!

P.S. The way Menma thought of a sleeping Naruto was cute was hilarious. Lol. ...This won't become a yaoi fic will it? Just curious, cause I'm not a big fan of those. No offense.

So, I'll start off by saying I really like the story. Second, the characterization is very good. While it is true that Naruto's not acting like he does in canon, the change in personality can be explained by him doing art. I still have a few questions.

First, how did Naruto get into art? That seems rather important to the story. Second, it seems like he's learning a bit fast, and the stories moving a bit fast. By learning fast, I don't mean I think it's impossible, but it has to do with how fast the plot is moving.

Interesting I must say. Not bad at all. Although I am a bit curious as to what'll happen next. What'll be the repurcussions of the "technique" Naruto used for Menma be? Will he do it again? If so, will all the memories he's absorbed overwhelm him? Oh boy! I'm getting hyped up now! Please update again soon!

P.S. Also, you might wanna make him still suffer from the effects of "killing" someone. The way he got over it was too fast and the conclusion was kinda illogical.

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Very interesting and a unique... :D. Yeah the breakdown in third chapter was a little unexpected and not naruto :) bit doesn't affect much...other thing I felt was that he was going abt learning everything at once is kinda overwhelming..but if u just gloss over some of them {like flashback} or just say of hard it was after doing the training... Just my suggestion... Don't take seriously :)) more importantly, I hope you don't abandon this story... There's too many good stories being abandoned... -.-... I hope you update soon... And know that your story is just as good as the highly reviewed ones...

sweet job