why is the avatar a bad guy

Friendly FYI: From what I remember of Headmaster Dumbledore in the books, he had a tendency to like variety and he would be trying a different kind each day of the week. Yet, fanfic writers pick on the lemon drops to make him a lemon drop fool.

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That was amazing Lol No Voldemort! Lol that was a great chapter.

I would beat the shit out of Dumbledore and any other magical for threatening Bruce. In fact, I would let them know that they would no longer be allowed to be separate from the mundane plus they would also no longer be allowed to take away peoples magic just because they refuse to be their damned pawns it also is illegal to take away and alter peoples memories to know about magical. And to get the point across all current Magicals would be whipped to get the point across. And boy do I want to whip Dumbledore for all his shit how he has been threatening Bruce. In fact, Bruce should have called his butler and Guardian Alfred and have him get in touch with the Queen to deal with her rebellious and treasonous Magical subjects. Even going so far as have it where she knows that Bruce to be in the country under an alias to protect him as he gets his education for what he 2ants to do once he gets home to Gotham. And While at it has Her Call The US President to deal with MACUSA and call Gotham to let them know Bruce isn't missing he is just traveling the world to get his education to learn what he wants to know for what he wants to do once he gets home to Gotham. Just not what Siunce Bruce wants to fight crime and clean up Gotham so no one else has to suffer what he did.

I would order the school to never obey Albus plus I would Charge the entire British Magicals as Criminals. And I mean all of them. Every man, woman, child. And as part of that, I would strip everyone of their magic. Plus I would slap collars on them that would make it to where they could never be able to lie or manipulate ever again. I would make it to where they would never be allowed to lie ever again. Plus Alfred was a member of the Queen Special Forces and Intelligence Unit. This should know about the Wizarding World.

As for Chapter 20, it just proves how stinking stupid Wizards are. And how behind the times they are especially British Wizards. If they had bothered to keep up they would know they don't stand a chance. plus learn that The non-magical wouldn't put up with them much longer. And as a result, at least three are dead because they are so damn stupid.

If I was Harry I would have that f-ing castle destroyed and then arrange to invade the Ministry for Magic and destroy it. But if I was Harry he should have broken every single bone in Dumbledore's body and confiscated his wand. Then arranged for Bruce to meet with the Queen to tell her everything and then Have her strip The British magical community of their false belief of Autonomy and also have her contact her fellow leader around the World to do the same and charge them die their centuries worth of crimes to the mundane even going so far as to when calling upon a higher power to strip them of magic powers. And then go threw a possess of re-educating all the magical and pointing out just stinking stupid they really are. Their education is a damned laughing stock.

Im not sure if this is a spoof of not as half the time it's a logic(as best it can be) fanfic then its like im reading a spoof fanfic and i'm wondering if it's a sudden omake.

I get that you put in comedy bits that fine but the entire quirrelmort makes 0 senses.

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Even Dumbledore cannot recall his own full name!

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! I guess what I said in a fanfic of mine was wrong: awesome luck isn't a power Voldemort knows not. He got the stone through a stroke of luck.

Did Uber already exist by the time Sirius was arrested?

Sorry I liked the firepoles from the "iconic" series better.

Funny, Severus should know what a fire alarm sounds like, he grew up in the same neighborhood Lily did.

The timeline of this story is wrong. In Harry's twelfth year, he was locked up in the room in Private Drive that used to be Dudley Dursley's second bedroom.

This feels like its rushed. I like the plot, but i think you should rewrite and not have all the action piled up. i was left very confused as to what was going on. Also, Dumbledore is not a rash character, he is collected. I dont think he would attacked Bruce, at least not that early into meeting him; he would probably wait and think of a plan (and have endless back ups for that plan), then attack.