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supboyyyyy93 chapter 9 . 3/1/2018 alright some new chapters! it going great i kind of wanted to see ichigo's friends' reactions to his family's problem but oh well i hope we get to see more soon. this story is great! |
mehr03 chapter 9 . 2/12/2018 awesome updates...i am so glad that you have updated. I feel so bad for yuzu but i am glad how you are portraying the grief and pain of her siblings. Hopefully you will post the next chapter soon. Thank you for your hard work :) |
kat chapter 8 . 12/28/2017 ooooo who are these new additions? can't wait to read more :) |
kat chapter 7 . 12/28/2017 loving this 3 hope ichigo can pent out some of his frustrations |
kat chapter 6 . 12/28/2017 im a bit sad this was short, but I enjoyed it :) #sibling feels 3 |
kat chapter 5 . 12/28/2017 OMG i knew it was something non-medical! I wonder what the demon wants with Yuzu...? |
kat chapter 4 . 12/28/2017 yeeeesssss, please go on. Am I a bad person if I kinda want Karin and Ichigo to disply symptoms as well? loving the feels again! |
kat chapter 3 . 12/28/2017 gosh I really wish that this is just some outside source! I don't know if I could deal with the other possibility... T_T #torn |
kat chapter 2 . 12/28/2017 ahmahgard im glad this is more than a one shot - the feels! thank you for this fic! You've written Yuzu well, and I like that you're writing from the family's perspectives as well as Yuzu's |
TwistedFanatic chapter 7 . 4/2/2017 This is a wonderful story! Yuzu is one of my favorite characters to wright about. Not only because she represents the heart of the Kurasaki clan but her psychological profile is interesting to play with. While this story has some heartbreaking elements it really has me hook, especially with the idea of demons and other things existing. Thanks for writing this! Cant wait to read more! |
The Little Trickster chapter 7 . 12/18/2016 Update more please~ |
adzara chapter 1 . 7/30/2016 I read the summary and out loud said "no!" but here I am reading. How cruel QQ |
m chapter 7 . 7/30/2016 What is the protocol on demons? Would quincies be the ones to deal with them? I do wonder "why not possession" and about the significance of what Karin and Ichigo sensed. Anyway, it's been intriguing so far, and I'll be looking forward to the upcoming chapters. |
nimuelsa chapter 1 . 5/25/2016 I'm in near tears. You do not do this to me and make Yuzu sad, like, please tell me that she'll be happy in an alternate universe or something because omfg, nononNO, you do not make one of the most adorable siblings in manga or anime forget, not when they're the pillars and ohsoadorable in their own right and supporting and sweet and kind and you do not do this, not to me when - gah, this is incredible and sad and sweet and lovely and youdonotdothistome okay? |
Avid Reader chapter 3 . 5/17/2016 This stoey is so good and sad at the same time. On one hand I want Yuzu to survive because she is such a sweetheart but on the other hand, I feel the repurcussions if her death could be a lot more emotionally impactful. |