I really like this story, I love the concept of the successors

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so , please and thank you.

This is really good. Just one thing, winter Solstice is on the 21st of December, not the 22nd. It marks the shortest day of the year, much like the Summer Solstice, 21st of June, which marks the longest day of the year. Just thought you should know.

I love it, I need another Chapter

Good set up. I like the little seasonal message system you created and your explanation for the solstice. The nicknames were cute too. I'm curious to see the changing of seasons and see how the guardians and children will react. Keep up the good work.

Good keep going

Yes, Jack, invite every single person you know to a super secret event most spirits don't even get to see. That's definitely a smart idea. *so much sarcasm* I can already see this going terribly terribly no wrong. Jack, you seem to have no common sense in this matter.

YAY! KEEP GOING!

Hey, this a really nice start. I'm excited to see how the change from Autumn to Winter. I look forward to more. K

I wanna see more, this is so awesome!