Very well written, great pace, humor was spot-on, characters true to the originals while keeping in mind that they are older. The premise is refreshing in that you're not taking yourself seriously which in itself adds to the enjoyment of kookiness. I love Daphne in this, particularly her love affair with food and her attempts to cuckold Puck out of his own plate.
'She looked wistfully at her beloved...'
Love that line.
And, of course, I love the ending, especially with the whole hands above the head thing.

hahahahaha I love it!

Just wanted to let you know that I've read this about four times. It's hilarious, your characters are spot-on, and the ending is great. I honestly wish you'd continue this!

YASSSSSS OMG THIS WAS SO DIFFERENT AND AMAZING OMG ITS AMAAAAAYYYYZZZZIIIINNNNGGGG THANK U

Love this story! Please make a version of this in Sabrina's or Puck's p.o.v

Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for not having Daphne jump in and embarrass Puck and Sabrina with comments of how in love they are! I've no idea why people feel the need to make Daphne do that. It's not her style.
Also, I love this story! It's fun and simple and I learned a lot more cheesy pick-up lines. Always funny.

Oh, the cheesiness! This is great! ;D

You are a amazing writer, and this made me laugh so hard, but I felt a little bad for poor nick.

I loved that story! You should DEFINITELY do more either with this one or make another one.

That was probably one of the best Puckabrina stories i have ever read. I am just sitting hear in shock after reading this. Beautiful

BWAHAHAHAH! I'm dying over here! Those guys got what they deserved. All of the characters were completely in character, and I loved it.

it cute

I could barely contain my squeal myself. This was cute and the ending was really unexpected yet it really made sense with the story. Great job!

Okay, I loved that. I LOVED that Puck did not rescue Sabrina. I loved that Sabrina stood up for Daphne, and that you addressed both the idea that the dudes totally ignored Daphne (as in, acted as if she didn't exist) AND were idiotic enough to look at TWO sisters together and still say, "seeing as you are here alone..." Alone! They need their eyes checked, is what I say.

I'm not a big fan of the Sabrina-is-so-irresistible-that-every-guy-hits-on-her club, but I get it that this was a funny (and it totally was) shot at the insidiousness of pick-up lines and the satisfaction of watching Sabrina dealing with them. So I'll give it to you - especially since you gave us a very happy PS ending. Hurrah!