Love it

Awesome I wish you would continue it from after the movie pitch somehow escapes and tries too get jakie back!plz{insert puppy dog eyes}

That was good, I really like this :D

Really good story, you should continue it!

I like this. I was amused at Jack's reaction to being the one to be chosen as a hostage. "He figured he may have been wrong." It's funny! I'm hearing Jack's sarcastic tone in my head, and it cracks me up! Good job! :)