I always thought Corrin's reunion with his/her Hoshidan family was handled in a very superficial way in-game. Things like the cultural clash between Corrin's Nohrian upbringing and his family Hoshidan habits or Mikoto snapping about how Nohrian her child had become was exactly what it needed. Good job.

That final confrontation between Mikoto and Anankos was pure gold, considering all that happened. Especially that "You underestimated me" line.

P.S: "whose leering gaze sent an unpleasant shiver down her spine" oh, boy she doesn't know the half of it

Well, same as Arete's death: it was coming but it's still very sad :{

Well, that Arete would not live to see the events of the game we already knew, but this was very sad nonetheless :(

Geez, a death by childbirth, kids ganging up against one another, the Nohrian concubines being hags and Anankos toying with Mikoto...the universe just wants to watch the lady suffer, doesn't it?

You're right: the in-game Fire Tribe needed more screen-time.

"Kamui" being Corrin's Hoshidan name is an idea a surprising lot of people seem to have had, to the point it feels almost canonical.

Also, wow, we got to the fall of Valla pretty fast.

Oh well, the reason I prefer fem Corrin is mostly for her less silly haircut, so...

I'm liking this family dynamic between Mikoto and Arete. It really gives more depths to their characters than what they got in the game.

Mikoto had went through so much. Is this the lowest point? You made enough details.

History repeats itself...

A nice chapter explained most things after all.

This is a happy start...

I will be nice to see you writing this negotiation scene again.

and followed by a sad end...

You did very well on writing emotion.

Things will be far more simple if Arete and Mikoto both survive.

I wonder how Fire Tribe act, there are little information about them.

You did very good on writing family relationship.

Soul is a important topic. Can we call those things Undead? How much humanity left in those things?

It is nice to know the past. This explain the relationship between two countries.

Lots of Fun to see them meet, especially when adults behave like naughty children.

Is Valla magic really so powerful in water? Is it only available in open water? This seems too OP unless that requires dragon power?

Concubine War is a stressful civil war...

Interesting to see how Mikoto behaved in Hoshido the first time... Mikoto and Kamui certainly had a very difficult start in their trip to Sumeragi... Their first meeting is so amazing.

Political warfare is as important as real war. Nice to see such scenes.

Amazed to see such family images.

Didn't expect to see Mikoto behave that at all...

This chapter is so bitter and sweet in the same time...

This is the first time I know anything about the Fire Tribe... interesting...

This surprise is so amazing. Love to see Arete and Mikoto get together.

I never imagined Anankos was good guy until I read this chapter...

With this FanFiction, I first time realize how important Kamui-this name is...

Your scenes are certainly useful for me to write my own FanFiction, I should read this again...

Oh dear... Made such choice... "And eventually.. Finally... No matter how much it may hurt, TRUTH wins out. EVERY. DAMN. TIME." I'm not the one say this first...

So this was how Kamui, Mikoto, Azura and Arete left... Traumatizing...

Water, what a interesting opposite element compares to the Bonfires of Dark Souls...

This is the first time I know Dragon's Vein is so useful. The magic power of Valla is so different to Lothric in Dark souls, while the first place is controlled by dragon and the other place is controlled by human...Dragon seems being on top of the food chain in Fire Emblem while all Dark Souls dragons are driven to extinction... So fascinating comparison between two series...

It is also amazing to see how Mikoto and Corrin's father came together. Surprisingly romantic...

I totally didn't know Arete had been such kind of people long long time ago. Great to know the past.

I didn't play any Fire Emblem game, and I really noticed it the first time when I was reading Dark Souls crossover. While I searched for Mikoto live AU, I found your "The Invisible Princess" chapter 10, which I am so IMPRESSED by this wonderful story.

Honestly, I don't know this story is canon, AU or OC, but POV from Mikoto is too amazing. The background story certainly is great help for understand Fire Emblem Fates without touching the game, too.

This start is so interesting. Hard to not say that Dark Souls world is far more desperate than what I read from your chapter 1. Thanks for the start.