Why did u have to go and give me a heart attack! I THOUGHT ERIC WAS DEAD!

Holy shit. Great. Now I’m crying.

I really like how with your story, you point out how irrational Tris actually was. In Insurgent, we kinda honor all her choices, but with this, you show how stupid she can actually be. Nonetheless, I still love Tris. Great story!

In the first story Pen was so hardcore, now she's just whiney and selfish.
The only amity trait she has is forgiveness; She can forgive Eric for murdering her sister but can't even look at Henry.
...still want to see what happens though :)

Tris is an idiot. So nice to read a fic that portrays her as such.

Even better than the first one! I loved it!

Yay lovely story. looking forward to the last one.

Aww means I gotta get back to work. ...I'm excited see what you have in store next!

I can't wait for the next book! As always, love your writing.

I have been so lucky that I could read the two chapters in a row! It was shorter but I totally loved it, I liked it much more than the books, how you described everything it was just perfect! I hope it won't take long for the third part to be ready because I really can't wait to see Eric and pen in the bureau, and of course all theong way before they get there! You have done a superbe job with this second installment! It was full of action, love, plot-twists, but especially it was full of emotions that you described perfectly! Thank you!

Oh my God! I hoped that waiting a week I wouldn't have to suffer the cliff hanger but apparently it's not enough! I loved the chapter,i really felt the action and the energy flooding through my veins while reading it. I was worried and anxious, i was suffering with pen while trying to save Nathan and then watching both him and kendra die (you really don't spare anyone from dying, do you!?) and I was so relieved when she found Eric. In the first part I loved how you portrayed the atmosphere, people dying, a war going on, the desperation of fighting and trying to win while killing traitors and trying to save innocent people. But most of all I loved the last part. I loved johanna and her perfect diplomacy, I loved pen worrying for tori while not sharing all her decision and I definitely was not expecting evelyn to act against pen and Eric! Bit i loved this because it perfectly makes sense. Overall, I love how you always portray every character so in depth, with all their flaws and inconsistencies, this is really special. As always, I really can't wait to see what will happen next, especially with evelyn, pen and Eric and pen and tris!

Nooooo!:( don't tell me he's dead again...

Ok few more days...I can wait that long...ima try

Yay, just in time to read he next one. I love the built tension.

:)