| Reviews for A Twist of Fate |
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   JMH23 chapter 12 . 5/17 Hi! Loving the story, keep it up! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/8 I wish this story was finished I was feeling it |
| Piletorn chapter 12 . 5/9 It’s not perfect (I’m certain you know) but I enjoy reading the story. The biggest thing I would urge you to look at when writing is which time you write the narration in (everything that isn’t direct speach or thoughts. Jumping back and forth between the story happening in present and it happening in the past is confusing and (to me) a little bit frustrating to read. Examples: Present - past I am - I was They speak - they spoke She kisses me - she kissed me Personally I would keep the story in past tense, it works really well for third person narration like you have written this story in. The Dream vision ideas are great, sometimes a bit confusing but overall great. Please continue writing! I would very much like to continue reading this story. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/6 this is amazing, please keep up the good work |
| Azurelight1472 chapter 11 . 5/6 Wow. Okay this is amazing, and beautiful and a piece of art. I absolutely love Lexa's softer side that she seems to reserve only for Clarke. I hope they can fund a way to live in peace and for both of them to stop fighting their feelings for one another. This is by far my favourite Clexa fic so far. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| xan-merrick chapter 9 . 5/3 Can't wait for more |
| FFKiwi chapter 9 . 5/2 OoooOOoOoo this is gettin good! |
| xan-merrick chapter 7 . 4/29 great chapter looking forward to more |
| David12leca chapter 4 . 1/14 a good chapter often ppl who write broken ppl do it with a linear motion I find the some good days some bad days a more realistic approach I like the way u write. |
| Nita Wolf chapter 5 . 9/4/2018 Hey, i know it's been two years since you've updated this story but i would really love to see an update |
| Mmmmk chapter 5 . 8/25/2018 I’m sad you never continued this but enjoyed it as you were writing! Hope you get inspired again one day! |
| FFKiwi chapter 5 . 4/23/2018 hmmm... u never added anymore chapters to this..? |
| Rez85 chapter 5 . 6/19/2016 This is a cool story are u continuing it? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2016 Love it, hope there's more! |
| Sailor Sayuri chapter 5 . 5/15/2016 Haha! Clarke escaped her room! *grins* But through the balcony? How did she do that (since her room is very high up in the tower)? *scratches head* Well done on this fantastic chapter! Good job! *winks**thumbs up* I REALLY want to know what happens next! *wails* Please update soon!? Pweety Pwease with a LOT of Apple Pie with Ice-Cream on top!? *BIG puppy eyes* Good luck for next chapter! *winks* Kisses! |
