...just out of curiosity,

WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE?!

more please this was reallygood

This is a good story hope you continue

I like.

can't wait for more

great chapter...

i am hoping he will get predictive (i think that's how you spell it) eventually as well as getting stronger than anyone and thing

this is amazing update more please

Wow this is one interesting story. I look forward to reading more.

love how this stories going, keep it up. also hope you can update more.

this is awesome i hope you make more 10/10

I like this Story and I'm looking forward to read more of it :)

Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!

When you was rewriting the chapter did you happen to forget to include the beginning of this one? You start in the middle of the bridge giving no knowledge of how they got there how the meeting with Zabuza went. This chapter made it hard to read i tried. But being dropped into the middle of the plot with no background information made it hard to do sure i picked up on some of what the plot was supposed to have been and i could make an educated guess at what it was supposed to have been but that removes the fun of reading someone elses work the key being someone elses if I'm having to create half of a missing chapter in my head or fill in missing details it starts becoming my half assed attempt at interpetting and predicting how your work was supposed to go but didnt. I couldnt even be bothered to finish reading so if the start is at the end then i missed it i tried skimming through but i dont think it is there. This needs work but other than that good story i hope you update it soon and fill in the blanks on this chapter.

Indeed, the wave seen and it's dialogue had a surplus of the cheese.