damn, ive never played undertale, and this is making me feel so guilty for wanting to. its amazing!

as a side note though, you spelt 'defensive' wrong. other than that, its glorious!

I really like this! Keep up the good work kiddo

Are you ever gonna update?

I'm super hyped for the rest of this story!

I. Love. This.
May it sit forever and ever under my favorites tab.
I don't know what the heck will happen next and the story is just so, so- new and fresh! I love it.

I love this story! It's an amazing concept, and it's always fun to read a story about something that's mostly unexplored by the fandom.

I've honestly not ever seen a fic like this one before, and I must say that I a man genuinely interested in were you're going with this.
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Ohmygod you continued the story! I've been reading this since the beginning, and I will admit that the writing quality wasn't necessarily the best, but... I loved the premise and the plotline so I dealt with it. And now your writing skills have definitely improved and the edits have made the story even better than it already was. I look forward to the rest of the fic (and hope that the updates are a little faster now w)!

I love this... I would've been screaming into pillow a lot more tho... XP

Oooo, an update. I got over here fast once I saw that email.

Have a comment biscuit :P

Well...first i would ask Sansy how things are on the 'surface' of undertale. Then i would have a pun-war with him. Then i would ask how fabulous Mettaton is! XD

GOD DAMIT SANS! XD

... Clearly my last review was magic.

Seriously, though, this never happens to me. I review stories that are incomplete and haven't been updated, and they stay that way. And occasionally I look back and mourn them, and hope for an update someday that never comes. They do NOT update the same day I leave a longing review. Nope. Doesn't happen. It's like...

It's like I left a note for the story and it responded. :D

Ok, enough silliness. Although I AM very happy for this new chapter, make no mistake. Thank goodness for Alphys' common sense about computers and privacy. Poor Player, though. When even shutting off your computer doesn't work... On the other hand, I can totally understand where Sans is coming from. I'd be suspicious too, especially after the whole deal with Flowey.

One thing: the formatting is slightly off. To be expected, maybe, of ffnet. Still, it makes reading a bit awkward.

IT LIIIIIVEESSSSS!
*I actually kinda forgot 'bout this*

That Reader turned the power off?

Geez. I would DIE if someone did that to me. No, forget that, I would be pissed. Some people have to just respect privacy, geez.