That was very nice, I wished you will pick this up again. Just a pity that it's not finished. I also like your fanfiction crossover between Fullmetal Alchemist and Harry Potter, heart-clenching but a great story all the same.

AH i got so intrigued only to realize this hasn't updated in almost a year... rip...

Great storyline as usual! The story behind how merpeople are created is one I've never heard and it's very interesting! I'm wondering how Winry got back to being human again and how Hoho will react to seeing Ed, but I have my theories. I really do hope Ed and Al will be able to reunite; maybe even Roy and Maes too. I'll make sure to stay notified for if there's an update, I look forward to see how this goes!

Such an excellent story I wish it was all out so I could finish it! Also, you made it possible for Hughes to still be around even if he can’t get past the surface (on his own, yet) to get to his darling Elysia and Gracia. The characterizations and world building are amazing; I love when an AU has its own world built for it. It shows a lot dedication and creativity by the author. I love merpeople fics, and this is a brilliant Fullmetal fic.

This is such a fascinating story! I really like it! It's such a creative concept! can't wait to read more!

Amazing story from the first chapter I'm hooked.
I could read this thanks to google so maybe my comment is not understood much.
It would be interesting to see a scene from Ed singing in the tank while Roy is listening. It's just a fantasy so if you do not like it ignore it

One of the things I love about your writing is that so much happens so quickly yet it never seems rushed. From the first chapter I was completely and totally hooked. Just five chapters in and so much has already been set into motion, yet it seems to be only the beginning. This is great.

Reminds me of Pirates of the Carribean's 4th movie.

This is amazing! Thank you so much for writing it!
I love the whole merpeople idea and all the characters are awesome! I can't wait to see what happens to Ed! And what does Riza know? How will Alphonse react when he sees his brother again?
The story is good too. I devoured all the chapters, because I just couldn't leave it. Now I just want Edward to morse code Roy something...
I can't wait to see how you continue.
Thank you for this!

I'm so glad you're still working on this story! I thoroughly enjoy reading it and I have a couple ideas of where this could go regarding Riza, and so I'm going to reread the last couple chapters to really get back in. There are a lot of things I enjoy about this story I'm not sure I could put into words properly, but if I ever feel I can I sure will try to. Good writing and I hope you have a lovely week!

Wow! That was really good :) I love this story sooo much! It was amazing. I usually don't comment on stories, but when they are extremely good I do it. I really, really, hope you update soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D

Happy (late) Easter literaturework!

Welcome back, great chapter

I'm so glad that you updated! 3
i like how the exhange between merpeople and humens are written. it feels like I'm standing there watching, not reading.
i lool foroward to the next chapter! feels like the confontation between father and son isnt so far away :3

great chapter! Is Winry going to turn out to be like Ariel from the Little mermaid? (actually don't answer that lol) I can't wait for the next chapter!

OMG that was awesome please write more