I wish this story was longer and followed the path of the series

This chapter is so confusing o.o

Wow, that was disjointed and dark.

Thank you for writing this story I quite enjoyed it even with some grammar mistakes it. It was still very good. Keep up the great work.

I can’t read anymore of this. I have been reading your work for years and have really enjoyed the stories you come up with, even though the overuse of Kara in your stories is getting to be a bit much. I am not sure how this story got past my notice but I recently found it and figured I would see what it was about. I have no clue what the fuck is going on, the first chapter is just completely confusing but I continued to read because I hoped to get an explanation of what’s going on. Yeah I got the bare bones of it but what was all that other disjointed nonsense that tried to tie it together this just seems like night and day from any of your other stories. I checked the reviews to see if anyone else voiced this but everyone just seems to want to jerk you off saying how it’s a good story.

Ah an excellent read I believe Goldilocks would say that it's just right

Why is it I can -easily- believe Dudley Dursley throwing a computer through his window over the keyboard lacking an Any key?

Of course, I also read Canadibrit's "Harry Potter Meets the Flack Jacket Mafia"...

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"My laptop screen got ruined when Mr. Weasley got white-out all over it! I that that was like computer -myth-!"

"He knows from white-out?"

"Yeah, he's got it in his shed, one shelf down from the plugs."

Pretty much only in name related to harry Potter

Excellent

you louisecypher are a dick

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

Ok, so I'm not a comic aficionado. What character are you turning Harry into?

A little short of one of your chapters, same can be said for this story. However, I enjoyed this one, and I believe your next one is a journey towards Gotham. Will we see Batman and his family? Especially Barbara Gordon.

great story

Awesome job on this chapter!