Wonderful!

I've really enjoyed the story... a little disapointed in myself for putting off reading it for so long. Not often I see a protagonist with such an explosive temper, and have the author actually bring up the downsides to that temper.

As for Slade... I can't help but wonder what his final plans for Match were, my money is on turning her into a breeder basically.

The ONLY thing I can think of to complain about the story is the plot hole of the League never just coming to Jump themselves to pick up the briefcase, either by Javelin or teleportation... if they've acquired that tech yet.

It was a pleasure to read your story i really enjoyed it. I am exited for your new stories and I will give all of them a Chance. Thanks for sharing your story with US and have a nice time off and fun while writing your new stories. Byebye

I still miss the relationship with slade. It was a main reason for reading your story. But I never thought I would like a yuri-story with ravenxoc. Not shure if happy or sad with it. But all together I really enjoyed it. It suprised me in many ways with the twists and turns. Keep your style, keep your wonderful creativety and I am really looking forward for reading the next and sadly last chapter.

Oh noooo you have one of the most evil cliffhangers created. I bet the one who talked to her out of that black tank was slade. I am looking forward reading the next chapter. yay bye

Another excellent chapter. Your dialogue is light years better. I was a little surprised how quickly Raven and Match fell into sex, but hey, go big or go home. :-)

Raven is such a complicated character to write. While she does seem a bit OOC here at times, I think you've captured her basic essence. Raven seriously got bold here and seemed to decide that shit was gonna get real with Match. I can't see her so casually dismissing the loss of control of her powers with a curt "Who cares?" seeing how if she really lost control she could probably tear the Tower in half. But your citrusy lemony scene was certainly good. :-D

Let's face it: Writing a classy lemon scene is crazy fun. And doing it without dropping a single profanity is like an art form. I challenge any lemon writer to do it without falling into the frat-boy zone. :-)

I look forward to the next chapter!

Really good story. Can't wait for more!

Hey nice new chapter. I have to admit that I like the stuff that happens between raven and match, but I prefer the things going on with slade. Don't know if I am alone with this opinion, but I hope I am not.

Thanks for the fast finishing of the chapter. Have a nice time byebye

Totally diggin' the vibe now, especially the way Robin took Match down a few notches over the healing thing. I never would have thought about the empathic connection to pain like that. I think you've found your rhythm.

The tension between Match and Raven is creeping up and definitely getting more interesting. It feels like they are starting to see each other as more than just friends. I can't see Match getting bent out of shape when she finds out Raven's family history, unless she had some bad experience with a demon or something.

The suitcase, the suitcase, the suitcase... What is in this suitcase, I wonder?

Loving the dialogue now, by the way! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Great chapter. Even if you post your chapters very fast, they don't miss quality.

I hope there will be some m-rated action between slade and match soon.

Have a nice time byebye

I had mixed feelings about this story, at least in the beginning. On one hand, I felt like Match was a bit like a Mary Sue; Powerful, beautiful, has a sort of mysterious past and is such an expert at hand-to-hand combat that she almost beats Slade. But as the story has been progressing so far, her weaknesses are starting to show. Like her defenses are starting to crumble. I feel like she's become more likable and definitely more interesting.

Match's relationship with Raven... I'm trying to figure out if it's becoming more friendly, sisterly, motherly, or if there's a genuine romantic tension between them. I'll admit, I'm curious to see where they are going.

The only complaint I have is the dialogue. It needs to flow a bit better. In the first few chapters it didn't seem natural the way Robin or even Match spoke. I think it's gotten a bit better, but I would definitely suggest you try reading their dialogue out loud and hear what they are saying.

Other than that, I'm really liking this story now. Looking forward to the next chapter!

-MeatLips

Ordinarily you'd feel sorry for someone like Match, caught between the Titans, Slade and Madame Rouge but she seems to have it covered. The only thing I'd say that could be improved is a sense of jeopardy, it's not that she doesn't have difficulties, it's that she always seems to come out on top. Sometimes a character has to lose badly once in awhile to make them more rounded.

Although then-again when you've pissed off a shapeshifter that can disguise herself as anyone or even anything, I'd say Match has plenty to worry about. xD

Wow okay I love this story. I was hoping there would be some Starfire and Match interaction and there was! I'm definitely curious to see how the meeting plays out, will Slade try to kill her again, or does he have a different motive this time? :P All the suspenseeee! Again, I'm impressed with the accuracy of all the characters, and I loved the Red X fight scene from the other chater. Looking forward to the next update!

This is such a well written story. Can't wait to see what's inside that briefcase! I love the complexity Match has and the way the Titans and Slade are written. Definitely keeping an eye on this fic! :)

Ooh~ I loved this chapter. Nice fighting scene!