No one:

Nala: Ight imma bout to head out.

I'm pretty sure that story is really great! Just try your best to ignore the haters!

I already read the whole story. But it won't let me post another response on the last page. How do I write a story on this website.
P.S. if I do get an account the name of the author will be Punda Mbaya

I liked this story. It was good. I wanted to ask you how to write a story on this website. Please respond. If you do just post the response on this page.

P.S. This is the same guy who started with "This is a really fucked up story" in my last response

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GuiltySpartan, this is the same guy that started his last response with "This is a really fucked up story.
There was also no name on my last response. I wanted to ask you what your next sequel is called. If you read this, your next story should be about Kion and Fuli's cubs. I also think that Rafiki should find a magical fruit that heals Fuli. It should give her back full speech ability and heal her leg. The fruit should also heal Kion. He should be able to have cubs of his own (If you know what I mean) I would also like to tell you that you had a lot of spelling errors. For example, Scar's forma den. Forma is not a word. The word is former. A lot is not spelled allot. There are more that I do not care to name. Also I would like to know how to post my own story on this website. If you respond to this please post the response on the last page of the story. BTW, the name is Swahili. Put it into Google translate.
PM, Signing out :)

This is a really fucked up story. Too much sex. And too many people died. Also, you are very bad at spelling, and the grammar was horrible. Why did you make it that Kion could not have cubs of his own?
You killed off Simba and Nala. You made Simba an abusive father and spouse. You made Kovu a cheater, and what's even worse is that he committed incest! Then, Fuli went and mated with some random dude, and Kion was fine with it?! In the story you said that Kion was all that Fuli needs, yet she goes and mates with some random dude to have cubs?! And, why did Kiara die? You killed off a bunch of random cubs. And why in the name of God would Kion be so dirty? "Get ready for the main event." That is just weird. And, "Th-at was ama-zing Kion."
"Same here." That is a bit much, don't you think?
The story had an overall great plot, but it was just crazy. Also, in the end, you noted that Kion was telling all of this to his cubs. Why would he tell this to his cubs, with so much sex?! And, how would he know what was happening when he was not around? And, why was Fuli so eager to have sex? And I know that Janja is bad, I watch The Lion Guard, but ruin Kion's life? Also, why did Simba and Nala just decide to have sex in the royal cave before Sarabi's funeral? In such an open area? The next Fan-Fiction that you write should be less messed up. I write better stories than you do. You also need to work on spelling and grammar. Don't you have auto-correct? I liked the story, but you need to work on spelling, grammar, and using less sex in your story. Also, maybe you could say breast instead of teat. Teat is a bit vulgar. And, I did not even know there were humans anywhere near the Pride Lands. I know it is in Africa, but I always thought that it was some sort of different world in our multiverse. Also, why was Simba working with Scar? Why did you not tell us what happened to Scar in the end? Why did you make the story so that Fuli cannot talk well? Why did you have to disband The Lion Guard? Kion is not the type to have so much sex. But, I think that the next Fan-Fiction that you do should be about the Wings of Fire book series. This was a good story, there was just a lot wrong with it. One last thing, I do not think that the name "A Fathers Love" suits this story.

Ew gross you just made Tiifu into a desperate slut, because the real one only seems him as a friend and he only sees her as a friend too. Kion treated Tiifu more like a little sister and on top of that why would he be with Fuli for and look after Kiara's cub? That's just weird you suck at portrayal badly. You're wrong and shouldn't be writing for a kids fricking show!

DON'T BE SORRY KION THAT DICK OF A DAD OF YOURS HAD ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL THAT COMING FOR A LONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG TIMMMMMMMMMME!

Yah NOW Simba is "acting" like a good animal.

WHAT THE HELL SIMBA WHATS GOTTEN INTO YOU!

Thank you Kovu, FUCK YOU SIMBA!

GOD DAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNN!

Oh my god...*sobs into pillow*

you killed most of them
UGH!

One of the best