nice.

It made me laugh when Luffy dragged Marco out. He shouldn't have said that, hahaha!

This is a nice fic! I love Luffy's insistence and Marco's futile attempts to refuse. I'd like to see a sequel with Marco reuniting w/ his brothers (a happy-crying reunion?) and pulling himself out of his slump! Great work.

Marco with depression and anxiety. God lords, only Luffy can help him. The stubborn little brother of Ace sure had no idea how the word NO means, when he has his mind set on something. Marco, you'll learn soon enough there's no way out of this.

Also the image of Luffy dragging off with an unwilling Marco ... Priceless.

You don't tell Luffy things like "I'd rather be dragged." or "No."

This made me laugh.

OMG HAHAHA THAT LAST SENTENCE THOUGH

Is it sad I want more Marco being dragged along by Luffy's whims?

awesome

Lol~ that's totally something Luffy would do.

I read an interesting MarcoLu the other day and now I'm searching for more!

XD Yep, totally how he'd go about convincing Marco if this was the result of all that. XD

This was sad but the ending helped. Just the mental image of Luffy dragging an unwilling Marco out of the cave by the heel just struck me as hilarious. Love this. _ Thank you for sharing your writing!

LOL for Luffy's trouble with Big Dog and Cat's names, very Luffy

The "pris-sanctuary" part was a good touch

LOL perfect with Marco accidently agreeing to be dragged and the results, and Luffy's priorities, again very accurate and amusing at once

haha Luffy!

I was already grinning because of how Marco just did not get Luffy's thought process and did not seem to realize that Luffy being equally stubborn to Ace would mean that Luffy would not leave him alone when I got to Luffy's cheerful "Okay!" The last three paragraphs were read through laughter that I did not manage to stop until I started writing this review.

I really like how you wrote Marco's thought process here, it works incredibly well, particularly the stumble on prison-sanctuary.

Well written. Good read.

Poor Marco. He should have realized it would be less painful (and less of a headache) to just agree with Luffy from the start.