Reviews for Harī: Mahō no Bōken
reptoholic chapter 4 . 3/24
So much potentiallllll
reptoholic chapter 3 . 3/24
Keep it up
reptoholic chapter 2 . 3/24
Love it
reptoholic chapter 1 . 3/24
Cute
TomRiddlesTwin chapter 4 . 7/22/2019
Awesome fic!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/5/2019
Pls update your story is so fucking good.
Dawn Nightshade chapter 4 . 1/21/2019
Please update or adopt out this story
acetwolf94 chapter 4 . 11/25/2018
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
bebepantheon chapter 4 . 10/8/2018
I love it! I wonder if “Death” will make an appearance! Will she somehow get a summon or one that wondered into her garden and took a liking to her?
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 4 . 8/12/2018
You need inspiration? Have you tried rereading your story and any notes you made about what you want to include later? Suggestions/thoughts I have for the story are...because they made an alliance where she's essentially being paid to help them when they're in need and not fuck them all to hell on a whim or out of anger she should be getting major bank and expect as much. Like...if they try to go cheap she haggles like a boss and charges them extra for any action she takes to save, protect, inform, fix, or heal anything of or in the village and makes it clear that she won't so much as twitch in there direction unless payment is guaranteed and attempting to cheat her would have dire consequences. If they argue about how she already gets money she could inform them that its just a current deterrent to keep her from becoming their enemy. Then there's the fact that she's not really a "civilian" due to the alliance treaty and is free to do and go as she wishes without "permission" so that she can continue her wandering when she feels like it. I feel like her being there will stop Sakumo from killing himself which will in turn stop Kakashi from his (first?) depression over that. Also Kakashi is at least a bit more open and such due to Hari's and the trio's influence. Her and Jiraiya become good friends with her even throwing out random advice for his book series when he starts it. Idk if you wanna go through the romance between her and Kakashi's dad but I'm sure it'd work out...though it would be weird if Kakashi had picked up on calling her "big sister" since the others call her that while his dad is trying to court her and if they got married and he still occasionally calls her sister which while weird could be funny. All of Danzo's attempts to have her personal life infiltrated end up failing. Have her meet a young Might Guy and see how he and Yahiko get along. I wanna know how she handles this damn uchiha too. And if Kyuubi pops up would she be able to seal him in a jar like a firefly?
I hope you continue this some day.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 2 . 8/12/2018
Your first crush was an adorable, soft spoken, oblivious, sarcastic mcsass pants rule breaker in the form of Harry Potter? Nice. You got good taste.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
Highly enjoyable so far. Shame its only 4 chapters and incomplete.
belle hawk chapter 3 . 3/24/2018
Wish you would continue this story. It seems everyone is abandoning their stories these days
Seruni Chantique chapter 4 . 3/5/2018
Please update
917brat chapter 4 . 1/15/2018
what you have happening so far and seriously hope that you decide to update again soon because so far it sounds great.
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