I enjoyed the previous story and this sequel so far. I hope you decide to come back to it someday.

rather sad to see this story has not been updated in over 3 years

It's a pity you seemed to have dropped this. I would love to see how this turns out.

And it just occurred to me. Three Brothers (Acheron, Silk and the new Overlord) and three Mistresses. One for each? Juno seems like she would fit in fine with Silk and his Succubi. Acheron has an established connection with Faye and he and Kelda were companions as toddlers so it could go either way with him.

Please write!ore this is my favourite fanfiction it's amazing

Oh. My. Goddess.
I used to follow your previous fanfiction a few years ago, when i first got into Overlord, and i thought it great, and refreshing since it didn't fall into the awful misogyny/rape-apology that most other fanfics do in this fandom.
Sadly, life got in the way, and i never quite managed to read The Furies 's seventh chapter. Until today that is. I just binge-read your whole serie and holy shit it's so freaking good ! I love what you did with your characters, the physical and psychological changes they went through, as well as their backstories (i won't lie, i just want want to start Overlord over again and burn Mellow Hills to the ground now) and now this sequel, with the new generation and the plot thickening and... Holy hell it's just so awesome !
I know you haven't updated in a while and i'm not going to nag (my own fanfics have been neglected for so long i can't even remember the password to sign up for this review), but if you're stll working on this fic or if inspiration strikes, please, please, post again !
No matter what you choose to do, though, i wish you the very best, and thank you so much for this great story!
(PS : i love how you included and developped the often forgotten Ruboria and POCs in general, usually Juno is the only one mentioned and written as a white-washed ("tanned" wtf) stupid bimbo. I can't wait to see what you have planned for Inferna if you decides to write again ! )
(PSS : my apologies for the bad grammar, i'm French and my english is kinda rusty)

Absolutely love the series. Incredibly creative, while still feeling like a genuine Overlord story. I can't praise you enough for the amazing work you've done with what little content their is. In conclusion, moar pls!

Liked the original story, and glad to see that the sequel was updated relatively recently. )

It's been a long time since I commented on anything in this series, but I was really happy to see that you'd updated this fic. This is by far the most interesting Overlord fanfiction I've come across, and I hope you can continue the entire story to its finish.

Once again I'm enjoying where this is going. My only suggestion is mark the POV when switching parts.

Ah, the innocence of youth. Not necessarily Evil all on its own, but with some clever machinations it can create quite the paragon of Darkness, and you know what they say; the road to Hell is paved with good intentions and littered on all sides with the corpses of the fallen.

Good to see a update man looking forward to the next one.

Thank you for coming back, this story is awesome!

Please write more I love your fanfictions

OMG YOU have to make more overlord stories. I enjoyed it so much I kept looking for more . Excellent writing, great structure, awesome imagery. Again please make more overlord stories

I hope you haven't abandoned this story. I really like it. Please PM me to tell me if you will or won't continue updating.