That’s amazing, heartwarming, and an absolute balm on my heart, after all the angst (in every other story that made yukio hate rin) thanks a lot for sharing (and for writing positively about their brotherly bond)

I think I already reviewed in my account, but I re-read this and I gotta say, this is one of the best one-shots I've read in this fandom. Just perfect.

This was very well-written. No one was OOC. Loved the ending.

I need MOREEEEEE

Very very good. This would be an interesting full-fledged story. Are you considering on continuing it? Good oneshot though.

*cheers*
Love it.

This fic was awesom!

aaaaaa this was amazing! i read the first half during my work break and the wait between then and my second break was difficult to get through because i wanted to finish it so badly ; i might have faked a couple of bathroom breaks just to get in another paragraph or two v;;;
i really like how rin's able to sense people's emotions, i've always felt he was really sensitive to people's emotions in the manga, although in the manga it's pretty subtle and i don't think most people pick up on it, so it's nice that you expand on that in the way you did.
and personally i think anything involving toudou is always a plus~ he's so good at pushing yukio's buttons and bringing out the worse in him, so i love the dynamic between them.
thank you for writing this, it was a good read v

That was amazing. Continue plz.

Geeze I wish the next cannon chapter would turn out like this.

Fantastic story. You've got a great grasp on both the brothers and the myriad of complications which accompany both of them. I especially love your Yukio voice (but I am admittedly biased). I was sad to see the 'complete' label here because I want more of your fantastic writing, but I am also glad to have this piece to read over and over again. Thanks so much for sharing your work with us.

Great story. I almost wish that this is how it'll work out in the manga. Great action, characterization, and some comedy at the end. Well done.

Brilliant character development and a deep understanding of what makes them tick. Bravo!

Ooooo this is interesting. I always love it when there's bromance between the okumura twins and I can't wait to see more in the upcoming chapters. Obviously tho thugs won't be easy for them since Yukio is now a half demon but that's what makes it interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter!

YOU ARE HURTING ME. BECAUSE THIS IS NOT EVER GOING TO BE CANON AND I WISH IT WAS.

GAH YUKIO YOU IDIOT!

But this...damn you did good! And ha! Empathy for Rin is an awesome power. Anyone who thinks it's lame has never read the Heralds of Valdemar and found out what Talia did to that rapist who raped and killed his stepdaughter.

-hands over platter- Magic cupcakes for you!