Your writing is so true to the characters. Sometimes, while reading other stories, I wince a bit as the way that the characters 'think' or speak just doesn't seem right. Not so with your portrayal. I'm also really enjoying the dynamic between them as well as the fascinating plot revolving around this secret criminal organization. I can't wait to read more!

Really enjoying this story ... I was wondering if you are planning more chapters?

I like the cadence of your writing. I hope there is more to come in this intriguing yarn.

Thanks for sharing your talent!

This has been exciting and drawing me in. can't wait for update. I like the banter between Chloe and lucifer!

I'm really enjoying this story. I especially like the way you draw Lucifer, all in love and nearly disintegrating. His anxiety is practically tangible. And I love the way his weird behavior is freaking Chloe out.

Oh, and hey! I just looked at your other stories and discovered you're a Captain Swan fan, too! I'll have to check those out.

please update

Wonderful job. Really awesome plot and characterization. All the emotions including the angst, was spot on, and I loved it!
Well, I guess I'll have to wait a while to see where it will lead, and of either of them will be ready to take that next step... :)
I can't believe how good this story is. You have an amazing ability in writing. I'm just disappointed now that I don't have another chapter to carry on reading!
Please don't wait too long for another update... Please? I hate waiting for a new chapter!:)

This broke my heart. :( Poor Lucifer and Chloe! I feel so sorry for them in this chapter. It all seems so difficult.
Lucifer sounded so alone, defeated. Even when he didn't have the chance to tell her that he loved her, he almost did and now, I think, they know how they feel about each other.
I love your portrayal of Chloe's feelings for him. You captured her emotions pretty well in this chapter. And Lucifer loves her, now he just has to get her to believe it.
Great chapter... So much emotion and tension in it. You did such an amazing job getting the emotions across. It just helped add so much more depth to the characters.
I do hope they find there way to each other eventually.

Cute and upsetting...
This sounds like a really interesting idea! I don't know how I missed this one when it came out.
I absolutely love this flustered Lucifer! You described what he was going through very well. Ah just give him a strong hint or something Chloe. Take the risk. ;)
Great writing and I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship develops :)

Wow! I just found this story and it's great! You really captured the dynamic between them and I can't wait to see more.

Great story so far, please update soon.

Nice, you're capturing the contrast of Lucifer's inner turmoil and outer facade very nicely! And by the way, thanks for giving us a summary of the previous chapter. That's so helpful.

This is really good! I can't wait for more! Maybe Chloe should be the first to realise her feelings for him - something a little different from what everyone else has written you know?

April 28 (you updated)
Today is Aug 13. I saw you only had 2 chap before I started reading but I wanted to give it a go anyway...you have a great premise/story idea (and you write quite well). I would urge you to continue this if you possibly can...2 thumbs up

Good beginning...tons of potential!

Looking forward to the update! I love every word and just need more and more!