Reviews for Childish Mess
Mickey0107 chapter 7 . 2/3/2019
The end made me laugh the hardest.
Me chapter 7 . 5/23/2018
Freaking adorable, makes me wish there was a continuation or something
Average Joe chapter 7 . 5/20/2018
This was perfect to read; no unnecessary angst, no dead parents or friends/disowning, and no experiments on the poor ghost boy.

We need more fics like this. Thanks for this, really. This story was a lighthouse in the middle of an ocean of cringe.
Earthly Entity chapter 7 . 2/17/2018
Lol dat ending, I can already picture it. ten years from now, 8 kids 'Danny looks back at raven' "please tell me this is the last one?" Raven looks back and smiles"nope"
Guest chapter 7 . 9/9/2017
If anything, I want to see a continuation of this. This is delightfully funny.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/22/2017
You might want to erase the doubling of the chapter. As in you put it down twice.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/22/2017
The chapter has the same text twice.
Alice of Scarlet Flames chapter 4 . 6/23/2017
I don't know if anyone pointed it out yet but the chapter repeated
avidreaded chapter 4 . 6/22/2017
So... uhh... You might want to take a second look at this chapter. You kinda copy/pasted the chapter at the end of the chapter so it repeats.
avidreaded chapter 2 . 5/9/2017
Baby Danny plus all the power and powers of older Danny then you throw in one crazed up fruit loop and what you get is one poor fool about to take a ghostly wail to the face.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/13/2017
Ahhhh! Wow! I honestly wasn't expecting an update on this story so soon after I reviewed! xD But I'm glad for it, anyways, LOL. I'm glad I was able to help your plot development! There are just not enough stories with de-aged Danny in them. C: (It's just such an interesting plot device that can have multiple outcomes. Very nice, indeed~!)
If I suddenly come up with more ideas along the way of this story, I'll be sure to review and share them with you! *-)
(But oooooooh, I'm extremely curious about the circumstances that drove Danny to leave Amity Park!)
See you next chapter~! 3
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2017
Ahahahahahahahaha..! That's hilarious! xD It'd be even MORE funny, if he somehow escaped into the city, and they'd have to chase after him. It'd also be interesting if Plasmius got wind of this and stole baby Danny in an attempt to have a half ghost son. Either way, though, I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
mmsolargirl chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
I really like this story please continue!
randomphandom chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
Oh my gosh! This story is so adorable! I love baby Danny! Hahaha XD oh man... I seriously hope you continue this story! I love how Danny was turned into a little kid from the spell :) hahaha XD hopefully they can revert him back soon, but I feel like baby Danny will be causing some trouble for them... Hahah XD this is such an amazing idea and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Crowned Hunter chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
I definitely want to see where this is going! Please update soon!
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